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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 16, 2004 4:08:29 GMT -5
Part 1
a man was looking at some files of his and was punching a bag with boxer gloves
Cory mr kerkson Kerkson yes come on in cory Cory heres the picture is this him ?
cory shows kerkson a picture of david travers
Kerkson we must find him and kill him including that friend of his craig alerson Cory alerson is he related to josh alerson who we took out Kerkson yep thats his kid brother josh was close friends with david so is craig who is also close friends with him
kerksons cell phone rings
Kerkson what what do you mean he got away thats just great craig ran off
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons Supermarket Center
3 little kids were bothering a homeless man
Homeless Man stop it stop go away Boy youre homeless nah nah nah nah
david travers walks out and sees the homeless man being harrassed
David hey whats going on here Boy nothing david nothing David good lets keep it that way
the boy runs off
Homeless Man wow you sure did teached them a lesson David sorry they bothered you their friends of my little sister Homeless Man oh i see David Hey i see youre donating something here i got a dollar Homeless Man thank you sir god bless you David hehehehe okay
danny walks out
Danny you all ready david David yep
david and danny heads in the truck
Meanwhile Blue Springs Mountain Subdivison
craig runs
Craig davids house must be this way
later on
danny drops david off
Danny so you sure you got all that David yep Danny okay be home later on
david walks in and puts the groceries away
craig then gasped for air then he collasped while a tampa atf agent patrol car passes by
Jack what the hell Shanell ill call an amublence dispatcher we want to request an amublence Dispatcher copy that
jack checks craigs paulse
Shanell what happened Jack look a an enhaler Shanell so he had an asma attack but people dont have asma by collapsing Jack unless something scared him
Meanwhile Kerksons Hideout
kerkson sees the news about craig being in the hospital
Cory so the punk has asma Kerkson but that doesnt mean he aint dead yet Cory but he had an asma attack Kerkson people dont Reporter boy was identfi as craig alamerson who his brother josh was recently shot and killed february of 2003 theres been no report of foul play yet
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter jack sees a note in craigs pocket that has david travers name on it and jack calls david and tells him does he know a craig and david does and kerkson calls the person who killed josh to track down david and kill him
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 17, 2004 22:55:05 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Tampa General
Bowers agent brikers agent issacs Jack yeah hows the conditon Bowers he's awake now Jack so he's going to be okay Bowers frankly yes so yall going to talk to him Shanell were gonna ask him some questions
jack sees a note that has david travers name on it
Jack shanell look Shanell hey thats the note that was in craigs pocket Jack and the travers kid's name on it Shanell does this kid know david Jack yeah ill give danny a call about this see if they know craig
Meanwhile Travers House
Danny craig how is he okay ill tell him yeah they were friends his brother was also friends with them before he was murdered ill tell him bye david David whats up dad Danny remember craig David yeah who can forget him Danny he's in the hospital David what is he okay Danny yes David but how he ended up in the hospital Danny asma attack they found him down the road David he was coming here ? Danny yes hey wanna go see him David i sure do
Meanwhile Kerkson's Hide Out
Kerkson chet good i see they let you on good at juveiwel hall my boy Chet yeah but its crappy in there without fun whats up Kerkson remember david travers ? Chet sure do who can ever forget that retarted pregnant dog Kerkson well we can finally make our move and have our revenge also craig josh's brother is in the hospital from a asma attack but he's going to be okay but our main focus first now is killing david before getting to craig thats what i want you to do Chet ill be happy to Kerkson get your gang friends with ya and go take him out
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter david sees craig and craig tells david he's in danger and david panics also tells danny and jack and shanell to give him protection from these gangs
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 18, 2004 0:46:50 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile Tampa General
david walks in craigs room
David craig Craig david hi its good to see you again man David you to buddy how are you feeling ? Craig tired David the doctors said you ll be outta here tommrow Craig i know David the tampa atf agents found you close to my house on the road what were you doing there Craig i wanted to
someone was watching craigs room with bincluars and had a vutton then they pushed it
and craig started to here a ring that made his ears hurt
Craig aghhhhhhhh David craig whats the matter craig doctor Craig david sorry i cant tell you about what Bowers youre okay what happened Craig i dont know i heard this ring and didnt you here it david David no are you sure youre okay Craig i guess Bowers i think he needs his rest Danny yeah lets go david Jack excuse me doc is Bowers yeah he's asleep now Jack well okay
Meanwhile
Ralphie are you sure he ll be around Chet of course im sure i been waiting for this moment since they put me in juvieal hall the murder of david travers
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter david tells dusty and kate about the whole thing and they say their with him no matter what and nelson tells jack about the inicent when craigs brother was murdered
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 18, 2004 1:00:53 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Travers House
Kate so just like that they found him on the road close here Dusty what the hell was he doing there anyway David he was trying to tell me but he felt pain Kate pain what do you mean ? David he heard a ringing today at the hospital that made his ears hurt Kate oh thats awful David but whats weird is i didnt even here it Dusty its not a brain tumor but whatever it was must be desperate Danny yall want some cokes we got plenty Kate yes please thank you Danny help yourselve's
kate gets a coke so does dusty
Dusty perhaps agent brikers and agent issacs will talk to him about what he was trying to tell you David i hope so because im anxious to know
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Jack so whats the connection between josh's brother Nelson well its a good thing you asked see last year before you came on the force we took down a pot crack teenager gang we arrived but they fleed this was on february 3 2003 we found josh he was hurt pretty bad he managed to tell us the name of the kid who beated him and shot him chet markizo also david travers was a witness in josh's murder david went to tell craig and his parents they took it hard when they found out their son is dead so days later we found chet the boy harrassing a local kid we arrested him and some others with him and he got sent to juvenville hall Shanell now its beginning to make sense why craig wanted to talk to david Nelson yep chet markizo is back along with some new punks Jack that means david and craig are in danger we half to warn them
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter david runs in to chet and the rest and things go wrong when he does and jack tries to get in contact with danny but he wasnt home and david wasnt home either
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 18, 2004 1:12:02 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile Tampa Flyer Apartment
David mr almers mr and mrs almers its me david i want to talk to you Chet there he is Ralph looks like he's going to talk to craigs parent what if they come out Chet their not home kerkson checked it out their at work so this is a good time to kill david
chet gets out his pocket knife
david was inside the apartment complex then david sees chet and the rest
Chet hello david David no youre in juvenelle hall it cant be Chet i told you i was gonna get my revenge now i am its to bad craig is in the hospital after warning you were coming after you take him
ralph and the other grabs david chet gets out his pocket knife
then david frees himself then david punches chet in the nose then david runs chet gets up and with a pissed off look in his face
chet gets out a gun and shoots david in the shoulder
ugh david falls out the window
David ahhhhhhhhhhh
david lands on top of a car knocking him out unconcious
Ralph we did it david's dead Chet yep now lets see if he has anything we can steal
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter ralph and chet are outta luck on something and jack and shanell asks danny if he's seen david and they know now something is wrong
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 20, 2004 4:27:37 GMT -5
Part 6
Meanwhile Travers House
Jack okay heres davids house Shanell okay
jack and shanell get out of their car
Danny can i help yall oh its yall Jack hey mr travers is your son home Danny which one Jack david Danny no he shouldve been back by now Shanell odd Danny why whats up Jack we have reason to believe he maybe in danger remember when we found craig almers around here Danny theres a connection Jack yes this could be all connected to the inicdent when craigs brother was murdered Danny oh no the wheelers gang
danny calls the store manager
Danny albert its danny has david arrived yet Albert david never showed up Danny what do you mean nevermind thank you no no it cant be Jack we ll find him wheres your wife Danny shes outta town she would freak out if she knew what was going on lets go
danny jack and shanell leave
Meanwhile Tampa Skyer Apartments
Chet i always knew he was a weak retarted no where did he go Ralph no you shot him remember chet Chet of course you idiot i remember theres got to be some reason why he aint over here when someone falls out the window and lands on top of a car they've had it no no no nooooooo
chet kicks the car
Chet when i find travers ill kill him i will kill him
Meanwhile Carxwell Shelter
the homless man from part 1 of the story puts an unconcious david on the bed
Homeless Man 2 david you cant we half to get him to a hospital he's hurt bad what happened Homeless Man some other kids were chasing after him and shot him and he fail out the window Homeless Man 2 oh but still he needs to be at a hospital Homeless Man look he helped me so im returning the favor Homeless Man 2 but we dont know what to do with him its up to the doctors Homeless Man look at him
the homeless man 2 walks out
david groans in pain
Homeless Man look kid i dont know what to do but if youre lucky you ll make it it will be a miracule
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter chet tracks down where david is at and jack and shanell heres reports of gunshots fired so they head there for assistance and larry tells dusty and kate what happened
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 20, 2004 4:45:28 GMT -5
Part 7
Meanwhile Streets
Chet hes got to be around here Ralph ask that bum over there Chet yeah excuse me Homeless Man 3 what do you want Chet stop squirmming Homeless Man 3 havent seen no one Ralph how does he Chet unless
the homless man 3 runs off
Homeless Man 3 trouble help Chet oh boy
chet gets out a gun and shoots the homless man 3 in the back killing him
ugh
the rest of the homeless man heres it
Homeless Man 2 that sounded like rooney Homeless Man 1 check it Homeless Man 4 some people shot rooney it was some kids they must be after that boy Homeless Man we cant let them come in Chet to late were in now where is he
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Patrol Car
Dispatcher all units reports of shots fired outside of the carxwell shelter Jack tampa atf 105 to dispatcher were on it Shanell this should be good
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
Larry kate dusty um some news i got to tell yall um you know craig that boy a friend of davids well they have reason to believe he was in danger see (story goes into no audio)
T0 BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty and kate goes to find david and jack and shanell and danny arrive to go do some major arresting
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Nov 20, 2004 5:55:52 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile Kate's Farrei
Dusty kate youre dad told us not to get involved Kate but david is our friend he needs us Dusty well i guess youre right
Meanwhile Carxwell Shelter
jack shanell and danny gets out of the car
shanell sees a dead homeless man
Shanell he's gone Jack their here i know their inside Danny lets go Chet im going to count to 3 if you dont know move ill move ya myself 1 2 David *moans in pain* ohhhhh
chet shoves the homeless man outta the way
david moans in pain still
Ralph look the retard is in pain Chet well time to shut him up this time forever goodbye david
jack shanell and danny heads in
Tim its the feds Jack tampa atf agents drop the guns Tim we aint going back to jail
tim shoots at the tampa atf agents but jack returns fire and misses then tim tries to shoot the tampa atf agents again but misses then jack returns fire shooting tim in the chest killing him
Marcus chet they got tim thats it im outta here Ralph wait up
then as marcus ralph and sam and lee heads up other tampa atf agents arrive
Lee screw this
lee heads to the other alley and dusty punches lee in the nose sam tries to make a run for it but kate hits him in the face with the car door knocking him out unconcious
Dusty good move Kate thanks Nelson this is captain nelson of the tampa atf agents youre under arrest Ralph we aint going to back to jail we ll fight
ralph gets out his gun but nelson shoots ralph in the side
ugh
Nelson alright get them outta here Chet say goodbye travers
danny grabs chets hand hard
Chet owwwww Danny i dont think so punk Jack youre under arrest Chet you know ill be right Shanell we doubt it get this scumbag outta here Chet ill be right you here me we all will youre son is not safe neither is your whole family for that matter hahahahahahahahahahaahaha Danny david david its your dad Dusty oh god Kate oh no Danny come on david please no no *goes into tears* david please dont go you have a baby brother please Kate *also goes into tears* come on david dammit come on Dusty david please buddy dont leave us man David ohhhhhhh Danny yes yes yes youre okay David *moans in pain* i take it this is a showdown ow
3 days later
Meanwhile Tampa Cemetary
craig was paying respects to his brother josh
Craig well bro it looks like their back where they belong
david walks up towards craig limping
David craig Craig david youre okay oh wow
craig and david hug each other
David youre brother wouldve been proud Craig he sure will i also heard that they got to you David yes Craig well thank goodness youre okay buddy David sure thing buddy Craig i can come over to your house buddy just like the good ol days my parents said i could go David ill love that
Meanwhile Jevievelle Hall
a crook lawyer comes in
Chuck hey Chet anything Chuck yep you and the rest outta here at the end of this weekend so you can finish what you left off
chuck and chet smiles
chet has a evil laugh
The End
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