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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 26, 2004 7:19:14 GMT -5
It was a warm sunny morning in tampa florida traffic was busy
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
jerry rancho was looking in the mirror at his mushtache (yes mushtache he grew one a little and has some hair around his chin and jaw
christy sneaks up behind jerry
Jerry so what do ya think honey it makes me look older doesnt it Christy yeah like in your 30s or 40s Jerry yep having a mushtache is something to embrace Christy but how about not embracing that beared Jerry no ill shave the beared but ill keep this mushtache anyway breakfast time and a little dance
jerry holds christys hand and they dance around the house
Jerry here we go hahahahaha Christy weeeeeeee
they dance all the way in the kitchen
christy and jerry hug and kiss each other
Christy that was fun Jerry yeah i know hey look the tampa slumber house has some special Christy yeah i know kate and dusty and a few of their friends are going we should go to to look out and make sure nobody tries to put drugs in someones drink Jerry good idea Christy and a serious idea jack brikers is gonna patrol there also
Meanwhile Tampa Cemetary
captain brock nelson was visting captain bradshaws tombstone which of course bradshaw was buried next to his teenage daughters tombstone
jack brikers walks up towards nelson
Jack hey Nelson hey Jack you okay Nelson i guess Jack sorry about captain bradshaw i know he was a good long time friend of yours Nelson he sure was his brother served in the gulf war with me in 1991 yeah he has a brother Jack have you tried contacting him Nelson yeah i did hes gonna come here and claim his brothers body and also claim his nieces for that matter i dont think bradshaw meant all this to happen his daughter got raped but she killed herself a few days later to avoid embarrassment Jack thats awful Nelson yeah well lets get back to the station Jack is there anything i can do Nelson no you done enough thank you
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty and kate gets ready for the tampa slumber house summertime fiesta also kate convinces david to go and nelson and jack return to the tampa atf agent station
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 26, 2004 7:52:12 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
kate gets through blow drying her hair
Larry kate its dusty Kate okay im coming hello hey you on your way thats great do u think davids mom will let him go i dont know it could get rough we ll watch out for him yeah okay bye i love you to Larry now if david comes there to keep an eye out on him im not his parent but still someone could try to slip something in his drink ok Kate we will daddy Larry thats my daughter
kate puts on her white shirt and her short jeans and walks back outta her room
Larry dustys here Kate ok
kate walks out of her house
Larry have fun kate what time is it over Kate 11:pm Larry ok Dusty lets go babe
kate gets in her farrai and dusty gets in his truck and they drive off
Meanwhile Travers House
Stacy now listen david i dont want you to wander off you stay with kate dusty the whole time okay David i know mom Stacy they want you to go so you can fit in David well their here bye mom love you Stacy love you to
david gets in kates farrai
Kate so how was georgia David it was fun had a barbque grill out Kate i love barbque David its so delcious we also ate at dennys Kate now thats also a good place that serves good food
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty kate david meets derrick and karen at the soap box derby track and they chat out there for a little bit
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 27, 2004 5:08:24 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Nelson morning christy Christy morning sir morning brikers Jack good morning ill go get me a cup of coffee i didnt had anything to drink today just went by hardee's got me some breakfast there Christy nicely fresh sugar in it just the way we like it Jack knowing you you like to get hyper hehehehehe Christy yeah
jack gets him a cup of coffee
Nelson the tampa slumber house summertime fiesta starts at 5:00 pm Christy we ll be there at that time Nelson ill send some other agents out there to to keep an eye out on there Christy yeah
Meanwhile Soap Box Derby Track
karen and derrick were hugging and kissing each other
Karen i know ill have fun and so will you Derrick yep we can dance also and this summer is the best Karen i know look theres dusty and kate and davids with them
dusty kate david gets out of the vechials
Dusty hello there Derrick yeah David hey yall Derrick hiya david Dusty what a nice pretty day here Kate yeah
kate lays her head down on dustys shoulder
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty kate derrick karen david head to the tampa slumber house and christy jack head there also
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 27, 2004 5:24:02 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Tampa Slumber House
christy and jack arrives there
Christy here we are Jack lets go get something to eat Christy yeah boy im hungry Jack we ll have something good before we patrol Christy yeah
christy and jack heads inside the bar area of the tampa slumber house
Meanwhile
dusty david kate karen and derrick arrive
Dusty here we are Kate anyone hungry David of course Karen yep Derrick didnt we just ate Karen well were eating again
karen pats derricks shoulder
Derrick it figures Christy i say this is delicious Jack and i say youre right Christy hahahahaha Jack look whos here Kate hey Christy well hello there Kate catched anybody today Christy so far no Jack why dont yall come eat with us Dusty yeah what the hell youre family to us
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter the tampa slumber house party starts and dusty and kate do a dance but david feels left out so he chats with christy and jack
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 27, 2004 5:42:24 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile Tampa Slumber House
as loud music starts and some people cheer
Kate loud music inside and not so loud outside Dusty not so loud is much better when it comes to you
dusty and kate kiss each other
Derrick it sure is a hetic here outside how about we go inside Karen sure Derrick yeah Karen yeah dusty kate were gonna inside Dusty okay have fun hey wait dont let anyone you know Karen i wont Dusty thats my sis
karen and derrick walk inside
someone who is sitting in table watched them go in
the college person also takes pictures of dusty kate david and takes pictures of derrick and karen
then some soft music plays
Dusty care to dance Kate sure
dusty and kate slow dance
david feels lonely
christy walks up towards david
Christy hey david David hey shouldnt you be patroling Christy yes i still am so whats new David nothing much just sitting here and doing nothing
later on the soft music was over
the college person heads inside after derrick and karen
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter the college person drugs karens drink without her knowing just so he can rough up derrick some
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 27, 2004 6:11:32 GMT -5
Part 6
Meanwhile Tampa Slumber House
the college person watches derrick and karen then they head somewhere and the college person puts some drugs in derricks drink
then he walks off and derrick and karen walks back in
Derrick to us Karen to us
derrick drinks his mango
Karen is it good Derrick delicious
derrick vision gets blury
Karen derrick you okay Derrick all of a sudden i feel tired Karen oh no cant be Derrick you may someone couldve slipped something in my drink Karen looks that way Derrick geez
derrick gets up but trips
karen grabs ahold of derrick
Karen come on its okay Derrick i would like the son of a pregnant dog who did this Dusty what the hell ? David what happened Karen some moron put something in his drink wheres christy Christy right here oh boy Derrick i feel like i need to take a nap Kate its okay derrick
derrick gets ready to black out
Dusty hes passing out Christy ill get an amublence
Meanwhile Phone Booth
Sean hey its me listen i put this cool drug in larkins drink SGT Boyers are you sure this drug will work Sean yes i tried it on a female before SGT Boyers good and once he heads to the hospital finish him off Sean yes sir oh yeah and fix it where the cops and the tampa atf agents will know its an innocent SGT Boyers dont worry we ll get to that part
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter ambulence takes derrick in the hospital for a check up but hes okay so they release him but hes still drowsy and karen is confronted by a the person who drug him
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 28, 2004 6:04:10 GMT -5
Part 7
Meanwhile Tampa Slumber House
ambluence arrive and takes derrick to the hospital
Christy he ll be okay hopefuly sorry karen i didnt want to worry you Karen yeah i guess
karen walks inside
David will he be okay Christy we hope
dusty puts his arm around kate
meanwhile sean walks up towards karen
Sean is it a shame you know Karen pardon me ? Sean derrick larkins yeah very well guy isnt he Karen how do you know him Sean well karen its obious but i need to have a word with you Karen like hell you are
sean grabs karens arm
Sean sorry i cant let you leave Karen let go of me
Dusty lets go inside to see what karen is doing
Sean we can do this the easy way or the hard way
sean grabs karens arm
Dusty what the hell ?
dusty walks up towards sean and punches him in the nose
ugh
Karen thanks dusty
dusty and karen hug each other
Dusty kate go get your sister and her partner
sean runs off
Karen hes getting away Dusty dammit who was that Karen i dont know he said he knew derrick i think Dusty i think so to Karen yeah hes the one who drugged derrick but how does he know him Christy what happened who drugged derrick Dusty he got away Jack ill call some other agents on it
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter sgt boyers is pissed off that seans drug was not the kill and sgt boyers takes out sean and decides to find a way to finish derrick off
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 28, 2004 6:29:14 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile Tampa General
derrick was in his hospital room
doctor jeremy harnett walks in so does dr bowers
Harnett hes out Bowers check his eye lids Harnett fragel Bowers okay Harnett so this drug isnt bad Bowers no just an everyday average medication Harnett if its a everyday average medication then why did he black out a few times Bowers my guess is the medicine had a reaction to whatever he drinked over there Harnett i see Bowers accourding to the facts the drug should wear off sometime in the middle of the night and he can go home tommrow Harnett thats good news
Meanwhile Tampa Slumber House
Jack did yall find anything Christy any luck Jack nope nothing he mustve hauled ass off the propery Karen he got away Jack fraid so kid Dusty this is just a disgrace i say yall dont give up finding that punk Christy we wont and when we do catch him he will be arrested mark my word Jack lets go
Meanwhile Army Car
SGT Boyers you idiot Sean what ? SGT Boyers i just heard word off my scanner that the person of course derrick larkins who was brought in the drug turned out just to be a medication people normally take kinda arrtating isnt it Sean now wait it worked before i was sure of it SGT Boyers youre a liar i dont know why we bothered hiring you Sean now wait if hes still in the hospital then SGT Boyers then nothing you failed Sean what are you doing ?
sgt boyers gets out his silencer gun
SGT Boyers what does it look like im doing Sean wait you dont need that SGT Boyers oh i think i do Sean no no
sgt boyers shoots sean in the chest and ribs killing him
ugh ugh
sean dies
SGT Kyvers now what SGT Boyers we ll do away with his body somewhere and we ll set a bomb to whatever were going to put it in
sgt kyvers carries seans dead body and puts it in the back of the trunk
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack gets word on a robbery at a boat rental and when they go there they find sean but not the way they thought
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 28, 2004 6:46:43 GMT -5
Part 9
Meanwhile Tampa Slumber House
Karen all this i think i want to go home now first i want to vist derrick Dusty yeah you can drive derricks truck to go there Karen yeah i got to see how hes doing Kate we ll go there David yeah
jacks cell phone rings
Jack okay thank you christy we got to head out i just got word on a break in Christy ok guys listen yall go home okay after you vist derrick Dusty we will Kate man this just a way to ruin a perfect night Dusty i know
dusty kate karen david walks outside and leaves
Meanwhile Tampa Hatcher Boat Rental
christy and jack heads in
Manager *weak voice* over here ughhhhh Christy are you the one who called in Manager yes Christy what happened Manager 2 guys came in with a body and they hit me over the head with 2 metal rods now my head is bleeding Jack its ok we ll get you to a hospital Manager thank yall
christy and jack sees seans dead body
Christy this must be sean Jack yep Christy now after all this i dont think sean was working by himself Jack yeah hey wait you here that Christy yeah
christy sees a bomb ticking
Christy jack Jack yeah ? Christy lets get outta here Manager what a bomb Christy yes come on
jack christy and the manager run out and the tampa hatcher boat rental place exploded
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty kate karen and david vists derricks hospital room and he wakes up and sgt boyers and sgt kyvers move on to plan b but lay low for a few days
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 29, 2004 7:17:56 GMT -5
Part 10
Meanwhile Tampa General
dusty karen kate and david walks in
Dusty excuse me which room is derrick larkins in Securtary room 109 Dusty thank you Kate theres your brother dusty Dusty hey jeremy Harnett hey ya dusty Dusty hows derrick ? Harnett hes awake now Karen can we see him Harnett sure you can youre my sister arent you Karen yeah Kate of course she is
dusty karen kate david walks in
Derrick well the party comes here Karen did the drowsyness weared off Derrick yeah Karen thats good David you had us worried Karen derrick um listen i need to tell you you were drugged Derrick whoever thought of it Karen but the person who did it came up towards me and started to harrass me Derrick did they catch him Dusty no he got away
kates cell phone rings
Kate hello you have what oh great hes dead okay that was christy she said they found the person who drugged you but they found him dead he was shot 2 times and his body was found in a boat rental place and the manager was found on the floor but hes ok he was bashed on the head 2 times with a metal rod so he ll be here at the hospital having stiches and they couldnt get seans body outta the warehouse in time because it exploded Karen see derrick this boy sean said he knew you Derrick or he knew someone that knew me i mean what other reasons why he got shot Kate doctors saids you ll be out tommrow yeah we better head on home to christy said she called our dad and told her what went on Karen you get some rest
derrick and karen kiss each other
Meanwhile Compass Area
Kyvers okay sean failed so now what do we do Boyers we cant go after derrick now they might got all the cops tampa atf agents all out on us so we lay low for a few days and plan B when we start it will be just as we planned
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty kate david karen heads back home and derrick gets release as karen goes to pick him up
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 29, 2004 7:47:03 GMT -5
Part 11
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
dusty and kate walks out
Larry i heard Kate yeah were okay and derricks lucky Dusty yeah its a hassle Larry well they found a dead body a boat rental place exploded and what is what Dusty well im gonna go home noww Kate i love you dusty Dusty i love you to
dusty and karen hugs each other and kisses each other
Kate seeya tommrow at work Dusty same here
dusty walks out
Kate dad im going to sleep now Larry i know how it was you were tired good night sweet i love you Kate i love you to
kate goes in her room
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
christy gets out of her blue ford explorer and sees jerry
Christy when did you get home Jerry an hour ago i can tell the tampa slumber house was chaos since i heard over the dispatcher on the radio scanner Christy boy its just been a rough night Jerry yeah did you have something to eat already Christy yeah and the kids asleep Jerry yeah i put them to bed Christy okay
christy takes off her high heels
Jerry lets get on to bed
christy and jerry smiles
jerry picks up christy and carries her in his arms and puts her on their bed
christy puts her feet across on jerrys lap
christy smiles and jerry gentley moves his feet all around christys feet and toes and the corner of her toes and the edge of her toes as jerry is rubbing christys feet
christy exhales because she relaxed by her husband massaging her feet
christy and jerry have sex
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter
christy and jerry contuine to have sex and karen goes and picks up derrick from the hospital
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 29, 2004 8:21:08 GMT -5
Part 12 Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House christy presses her feet against jerrys chest and rubbing em agaisnt it christy then pressed her feet against jerrys face jerry rubs christys feet in fast motion and rubs her toes christy just smiles Jerry d**n girl you got some pretty feet Christy thanks christy and jerry hug and kiss each other and rub each others bodies Jerry youre welcome Christy im glad you think my feet are pretty Jerry and their sexy also Christy well thats one of the reasons why you married me you love me and you love my feet which are very sexy here rub my feet more christy presses her feet against jerrys chest again and jerry picks up both of christys feet and massages them again Christy im glad i married you Jerry me to jerry kisses christys feet christys phone rings Christy its jack hello hey sorry i was having my feet rubbed Jack d**n can i rub them to Christy sure hahahahaha Jack hahahahaha Christy so still no luck Jack nope i guess we ll try tommrow or the next day Christy yeah ok Jack well i gotta go now ok bye Christy bye Jerry yall catch em soon Meanwhile Tampa General Derrick im glad im finally out Karen me to derrick and karen put their arms around each other Derrick im going to take a nap at home TO BE CONCLUDED Coming up on the next chapter derrick and karen talk some at their house and dusty and kate head to larry ballatons supermarket center and they tell alan rossard what all happened
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 30, 2004 6:21:36 GMT -5
Part 13
Meanwhile Karen Flemings House
karen and derrick arrive and walk inside
Derrick well home sweet home Karen yeah Derrick im going to take a nap want to also Karen later first i got to eat something Derrick okay hey you know what ill eat something to
derrick puts his hands around karen
Karen ooo stop that Derrick i cant i love you so much to stop it Karen im glad you do im gonna put some pizza in Derrick suit yourself ill be waiting lets go see whats on tv Karen okay dokey
derrick and karen head inside the living room
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons Supermarket Center
Alan d**n good thing i wasnt there Dusty yeah it was hetic last night Kate frankly sean is dead and whoever was in charge of doing it is still out there someone derrick knew Dusty but who another college student ? Kate good question Dusty well ill go load these boxes over in the backway
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons Office
Denise got em ready ? Larry yep ready as it can be Denise good Larry not to attend of stuff Denise and alot more hahahaha Larry yeah hahahahaha
dusty walks out of the backway area
Alan glad yall okay Kate thanks alan Alan youre welcome Dusty well i got that done Kate the more the fun Dusty hahahahaha well lets load the buggies
The End
Coming Next Month
Moonwalker christy and jack gets word on that the manager of the boat rental now rememered that the 2 crooks were dressed in miltary suits and jerry ranchos mom nina emails jerry inviting christy and him to move down to key west because their looking for new cops and a tragic day as something explodes
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