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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 24, 2004 3:44:45 GMT -5
It was a warm sunny morning in tampa florida traffic was busy kids enjoying their summertime vacaction
Meanwhile Tampa Coljast
the manager was looking at some stuff
when a man with a gun comes in
Jimmy Alright you where is it Manager who are you Jimmy i want it now and im going to get it Manager i dont know what youre talking about hey you cant go back there im calling the cops
jimmy foylers shoots the manager 3 times in the ribs killing him
Jimmy dammit its not here
sirens are heard
Jimmy aw great
jimmy exits
Dispatcher gunshots reported i repeat gunshots reported at the tampa coljast Ellis dispatcher this is agent kevin ellis were by that area checking it out Parker lets go
ellis and parker heads inside the tampa coljast and sees the manager dead
Ellis hes dead hey freeze parker there he is ellis and parker chases after jimmy in the car
later on jimmy gets out of his car near a house
agent ellis and agent parker pull out their guns
jimmy pulls out his and shoots at them
Ellis lets spilt up Parker alright
jimmy gets out his gun and sees ellis and shoots at him but misses then ellis shoots jimmy in the chest killing him
ugh
Ellis its ok parker i got em Parker d**n yeah we got em
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter captain nelson sees a close friend of his who is new Captain of the PD captain bradshaw and he convinces to let an innocent man go of rape charges
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 24, 2004 4:15:42 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Tampa PD Headquarters
captain brock nelson walks in
Bradshaw i trust everything went well Ellis yep just as it was plan Bradshaw good were getting them Parker and we need to get more Bradshaw we will
captain brock nelson walks up towards captain harry bradshaw
Nelson bradshaw Bradshaw nelson you son of a pregnant dog hey whats going on Nelson i heard you were sworn in congralations man and its so good to see you again its been like 2 years Bradshaw yeah it has oh i want you to meet 2 of my men who work with me on crackdown cases this is agent ellis and agent parker Nelson gentlemen Bradshaw we recently had a funuearl for elli's brother Nelson yeah i heard your brother was cop he was shot Ellis yeah he was and he was a good cop to Bradshaw so he was trying to move on but its hard for him to on these accousions so nelson what brings you here Nelson well i want to talk to you about a suspect you arrested recently Bradshaw which one Nelson well hes mexican nice fellow eric goloempeso Bradshaw yeah hes the rapist yeah what about him Nelson well i got word that um we have proof he didnt rape that girl Bradshaw where did you here of this ? Nelson witness a judge also the man you were holding is innocent Bradshaw he wasnt the only one their were 2 Nelson yes i know and the second one was the one who did it please do this for his mom and me okay Bradshaw well ill see Nelson thank you
nelson pats captain bradshaw
Bradshaw hmmm
captain bradshaw goes to his office and looks at a picture of his daughter
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter the man gets released and captain bradshaw is not happy about it also a prison bus leaves and captain bradshaw ellis and parker follows it and something goes wrong
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 24, 2004 4:40:16 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile PD Headquarters
Ellis you ok Bradshaw no im not its nelson that son of a pregnant dog Ellis whoa first heres your friend now next Bradshaw yeah well listen that moron wanted me to release him for the judge the rapist because he claims some bullnuts that hes innocent after raping that girl Ellis he seems hard to get through Bradshaw yeah thats what im saying and its a pitty
later on captain bradshaw vists a jail cell inmate
Buddy well well well if isnt the new captain himself captain thingyshaw Bradshaw get up youre getting transfer Buddy make me Bradshaw okay
captain bradshaw hits buddy in the throat with his head and gets a crowbar and hits buddy in the nose with it
ugh
buddy coughs
buddys nose bleeds
Bradshaw now get up now
captain bradshaw drags buddy
Meanwhile
the mexican person gets released
Eric yeah yahooo Nelson hey there eric Eric hey mr nelson its great to be out Nelson yeah now the charges of you were clear so what ya gonna do Eric stay here in tampa and just for hell of it i already called my mom and told her i was released Nelson i know she ll be happy to see you
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter the prison bus explodes and captain brock nelson is suspcious on why it did and agent ellis sees captain brock nelson at a bar and nelson is suprised of his actions
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 24, 2004 9:10:20 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Prison Bus
the prison bus driving on the interstate
Prisoner hey buddy i heard you got off good on that part Buddy i know they ll never have anything on me
captain bradshaw follows the prison bus
they get close to the prison bus
agent ellis gives a bomb to captain bradshaw and captain bradshaw places the bomb on the side of the prison bus then they ride off
the prison bus explodes killing all the prisoners
then the prison guard goes through the wind shield yelling
Meanwhile Tampa General
Bowers it doesnt look good Nelson you saying he might not make it Bowers yes Nelson i see but he is awake right now Bowers barely Nelson thank you
captain nelson walks in the prison guards hospital room
Nelson sawyer my name is captain brock nelson captain of the tampa atf agents what happened how did the prison bus explode have you seen anything ? Sawyer *weak voice* ye ye ye ugh Nelson what yes what Sawyer *weak voice* i cant t ughhhhh Nelson please whoever did it will pay i will make sure they stay behind bars Sawyer *weak voice* a a a p p pd
the machine beeps and sawyer dies
Nelson sawyer sawyer oh god doctor bowers come here quick
doctor bowers comes in sawyers room and hes sawyer dead
Bowers hes dead Nelson yeah
Meanwhile Rody Bar
a waiter just brought captain brock nelson a beer
Nelson thank you
also agent ellis sees nelson and walks towards him
Ellis nelson has something he enjoys on his time Nelson what do you want Ellis is that anyway to treat a fellow non tampa atf agent Nelson for a man who is a pd its like this you know a prison bus explode also one of the prisoners was buddy kapkit the rapist who attacked that girl i wonder a prison guard died later on at the hospital he sad pd Ellis maybe he didnt know what he was implying you know how dying witnesses are Nelson and i know when a friend has turned bad to
captain brock nelson walks off
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter agent ellis tells captain bradshaw nelson is on to them and they try to make sure nelson stays outta the way
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 25, 2004 4:04:23 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile PD Headquarters
Fuller you seem anxious to do this bradshaw Bradshaw yes sir something that needs to be done Fuller usually if one of my men wanted to ask me something they wont rush it Bradshaw yes sir i know but
agent ellis walks in
Ellis sir sorry for interupting can i talk to captain bradshaw Fuller go right ahead
later on
Bradshaw so hes on to us Ellis yes Parker well we gotta do something if he gets in the way Bradshaw he maybe my friend or he may not now well we just half to make sure nelson wont get in the way
Meanwhile Erics House
Della dinners ready eric Eric ok hey mom thanks for letting me stay here since i lost my house after being arrested Della i know we sure hope we can find you a house
someone knocks at the door
Della who is it Nelson its me captain nelson Della im coming
della opens the door
Nelson hey Della come on in Nelson thank you hey eric Eric hey mr nelson Della were about to have dinner would you like to stay for it Nelson i love to thank you and i also have a resigernation youre probation has been canceled Eric alright Della thats great news wow
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter nelson finds info on agent ellis's brother who was shot last year and bradshaw is pissed that eric is released and goes after him
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 25, 2004 4:35:20 GMT -5
Part 6
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Kecketts is this it sir Nelson yep this is when agent elli's brother died he was a cop he was shot by some gangsters Kecketts yeah he was a pretty good man from what i heard Nelson yep oh and the rape girl Kecketts thats still being looked into Nelson ok well ill be going out now let me know by phone ok Kecketts i will
Meanwhile Flourist Place
eric was coming out with some flowers then captain bradshaw agent ellis and agent parker walks up
Bradshaw put your hands up Eric alright now what what did i do this time Bradshaw keep em up now face down Eric wait i know you youre that captain who brought me before what did i do whats the charges Bradshaw nothing percpilar but to make sure you wont rape nobody again Eric but i didnt rape no one
captain bradshaw gets out his silencer gun
Eric hey what are you doing no no dont please nooo
captain bradshaw shoots eric 3 times in the ribs killing him
Meanwhile Erics House
captain nelson walks in
Della oh hi captain nelson come on in Nelson i got bad news
the story goes into audio
della screams
Della noooooo
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter della just gets through visiting erics coffin and captain nelson shares his final thoughts and captain bradshaw agent ellis and agent parker goes after captain nelson
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 25, 2004 5:10:57 GMT -5
Part 7
as della gets through saying goodbye to her son at the tampa bapist church she leaves and nelson and della hug each other and nelson stays for a little bit then he walks outside the church then he sees agent ellis
Nelson what are you doing here Ellis a little discussion Nelson i have nothing to say to you get outta my way Ellis sorry cant do that cant let you go
agent parker gets out his gun and points it at captain nelson and captain bradshaw points gun at captain nelson
Bradshaw sorry nelson it had to be this way now you can consider me youre ex friend say goodbye nelson
captain nelson hits ellis in the chest then punches him in the nose
ugh
captain nelson runs off captain bradshaw and parker shoots at him but misses
Bradshaw lets split up Ellis im gonna kill that son of a pregnant dog Bradshaw come on nelson its your fault anyway you let a rapist go Nelson he was innocent Bradshaw dont give me that nuts nelson youre an not a very nice person you know and im gonna make sure youre finished
parker sees nelson and shoots at him but misses nelson shoots back at agent parker but misses then captain nelson shoots agent parker in the chest killing him
ugh
Nelson give it up bradshaw im taking you in
agent ellis sees parker dead
Ellis bradshaw parkers dead Bradshaw i see Nelson come on bradshaw dont let it be like this Bradshaw its to late nelson to late
bradshaw sees nelsons shoulder and shoots at it but misses agent ellis sneaks up on nelson and grabs a rock and hits nelson in the face with it
agh
ellis tackles nelson and ellis punches nelson in the nose
ugh then nelson punches ellis in the stomach and nose 2 times
then they struggle
captain bradshaw gets his gun out and gets ready to shoot nelson but captain bradshaw accidently shoots agent ellis in the back killing him
ugh
Bradshaw ohh no Ellis *weak voice* nelson you were right
ellis dies
captain bradshaw shoots at nelson and nelson shoots back but then captain bradshaws guns run outta bullets then captain bradshaw escapes
TO BE CONCLUDED
Coming up on the next chapter captain bradshaw heads to his office and nelson follows him and talks to him but things go wrong
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jul 25, 2004 5:19:45 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile PD Headquarters
captain bradshaw walks in and goes to his office and locks his door and gets out bullets for his gun
captain nelson follows him and gets out his gun he opens his office
Nelson ok bradshaw im taking you in Bradshaw im not going no where im not the bad guy here dont you understand that punk got what he derserved Nelson no the other one that got killed in that explosion on the prison bus was theo one who raped your daughter yes i know shes your daughter look you dont want to go behind bars without seening your daughter grow up do you she graduated from chamberlaine high school may 2004 Bradshaw my daughter is dead Nelson what ? Bradshaw she killed herself she couldnt stand to be emberassed when she would try to say in the witness where she was raped people laughed at her when she mentioned it Nelson i had no idea im sorry Bradshaw no nelson youre not sorry you dont know what its like to lose someone you care about Nelson i know what its like believe me but doing all this will not bring her back please just turn yourself in your daughter would be appericated Bradshaw i cant and im not going to goodbye nelson its been nice knowing you
captain bradshaw shoots himself in the head killing himself
Nelson nooooo
the story goes into no audio as nelson looks at a picture of bradshaw and his daughter at graduation 2004
nelson gets inside his truck and looks at a old picture of him and bradshaw in high school
captain nelson then gets tears in his eyes and starts to cry
THE END
Coming next week
Summertime Fiesta
the tampa slumber house is having a summertime fiesta and dusty kate karen derrick join in on the fun
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