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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 9, 2004 14:30:00 GMT -5
Part 1
It was a cool sunny morning in tampa florida as a day yet again to be of waiting of
spicher brennan was smoking a cigerette
derrick was watching him
Derrick i got you now you son of a pregnant dog Spicher all i need is to get my half then ill offically leave tampa for good
derrick walks up towards spicher
derrick stares at spicher
Spicher and who might you be Derrick well for once and your life time brennan youre Spicher ah and he knows my name Derrick yeah you kidnapped my girlfriend karen a few weeks ago Spicher oh so youre the boyfriend huh Derrick yes i am
derrick punches spicher in the lip
spicher is on the ground then he grabs a crane and hits derrick on the legs with it
derrick falls on the ground spicher grabs derricks shirt and spicher punches derrick in the face 2 times
spicher then throws a glass bottle at derricks head
derrick then lies on the ground weaken
Spicher didnt felt to good didnt it pregnant dog
spicher kicks derrick in the stomach
Spicher next time ill kill ya
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
christy had her feet on jerrys lap and jerry was massaging her feet
Christy i guess what they say is the best is yet to come Jerry and the first bet is already here Christy yep Jerry i love our jobs Christy i know its all the best
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter karen asks where he got all the bruises from and wendy sees spicher but spicher runs
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 9, 2004 17:30:42 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Derricks House
derrick came in the door limping
Karen derrick my god what happened to you Derrick i dont want to talk about it Karen derrick please what happened to you did you get into a fight and you lost Derrick just let it go alright ouch my leg Karen no derrick youre my boyfriend and im not gonna let it go now what happened Derrick i followed spicher brennan Karen oh derrick what were you thinking Derrick i wanted him to pay for kidnapping you Karen so yall fought and he won Derrick yes but im not giving up yet i want to fight him again no one ever gets away with that kinda crime nobody Karen look just let the police handle it Derrick for some reason they aint got nothing on spicher Karen they will soon believe me they will
Meanwhile Wendy Brennans Car
Wendy yes i know but its alot to them then it is to us no i yes well
wendy sees spicher
Wendy wanda ill half to call you back spicher spicher wait
spicher runs
Wendy spicher what are you doing its me your sister spicher
spicher drives off
Wendy dammit
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter wendy vists christy and tells her hes seen his brother and poggs gets spicher into another delievery
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 10, 2004 0:44:43 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
Christy so he ran Wendy yes i just hope i did the right thing by coming to you Christy you did i know you want to protect him because hes your brother but he done alot of breaking the law Wendy hes changed alot Christy i know i know how upsetting it id Wendy yes Christy ill send out a look out and tell kate what you told me
Meanwhile Equil
poggs was writing some stuff down levi walks in
Poggs what is it Levi the delivery has been protate right Poggs i forgot Levi so what should we do Poggs get brennan on it Levi look can we just kill him we dont need a white ass american their nothing to us Poggs ill figure out something to do and its the money delivery
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter poggs gets spicher on the delivery and karen tells kate the incident between spicher and derrick
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 10, 2004 19:30:23 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
kate was on the phone with karen
Kate what oh no what was he thinking Karen i dont know but he is very protective over me Kate spichers nuts he didnt use to be that way hes changed big time Karen well i dont know much of his history since i barely know him
christy walks in
Christy sis i Kate its okay christy i know karen told me Christy oh okay so everythings fine Kate so far yes Christy okay well ill go now bye Kate bye
christy walks out
Kate yeah alright karen bye
kate hangs up the phone
Meanwhile Equil
spicher walks in
Poggs youre late Spicher had to take care of some stuff Poggs time for the final delivery Spicher ill be ready Poggs good i want the money on set so dont let me down Spicher alright
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter poggs gets ready for his strike on spicher and yet another brawl is to come
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 10, 2004 21:10:51 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile Chevon Gas Station
spicher is driving to a gas station and he gets out a mask and his gun
Spicher this should be right i can get it this way
Spicher excuse me Manager can i help you ? Spicher yes you can i came in here a few weeks ago and i seemed to drop something back there can you look for me Manager sure Spicher thank you Manager i dont see anything
spicher gets out his gun
Spicher thats because i lied Manager no
spicher shoots the manager in the chest killing him
Spicher first timey now i got to get the money to make my boogie outta tampa
spicher gets the money and flees when he does a car drives up in time before someone saw his face
Meanwhile Equil
Poggs im not a big fan of americans i hate their guts thats why we need to finish our deal and get back to jamica Levi believe me we will once we deal with that spicher person Poggs hes gonna wish he never laid eyes on us isnt that right gang
the gang nods their head
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy is called to a scene and matches a dead body and sees camcorders of spicher brennan who killed that gas station manager
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 10, 2004 21:21:51 GMT -5
Part 6
Meanwhile Chevon Gas Station
the tampa atf agents were there
Nelson yep its a match i cant believe it i just really cant Jack neither can i Christy are yall certain its spicher brennan hell yeah Nelson that boy had a good future ahead of him now hes a murderer Christy his parents have been contacted Nelson yep i told his sister that her brother killed someone and shes shaken up about it poor thing Christy i guess this one way of proving when u get older you go to a change but in a certain other way Nelson its a hassle Jack yes it is
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
dusty walks in
Dusty kate did you see the news Kate yes i cant believe it Dusty now everyone is talking about it around school the teachers are also talking about it Kate why did he do it he killed someone i dont feel sorry for him he chose the wrong path i didnt choose it for him Dusty i know but we need to hang in there hes in alot of serious trouble now since he killed that manager
dusty puts his arm around kates shoulder
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher returns and he now knows he was being set up by poggs and spicher escapes and a brawl which leads the tampa atf agents tracking the gang down
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 20:58:23 GMT -5
Part 7
Meanwhile Equil
spicher arrives back
Spicher this should do it
spicher arrives inside the equil
Levi brennans back Poggs it is time Levi once we get rid of him we ll move out Spicher hey guys Poggs you got the money Spicher all right here Poggs excellent then its time but first some unfinsished buisness i should do right now spicher
poggs gets out his gun and points it at spicher
Spicher what are you doing poggs Poggs lets just say we dont need you no more so now its goodbye Spicher watch out its the swat
poggs looks but now knows spicher tricked him
poggs tries to shoot spicher but he misses and spicher runs out
Poggs get him
poggs sees spicher and tries to shoot him again but he talks off
Levi we gotta get out of here Poggs ill kill him ill kill him no i cant levi you track him down i half to get ready to make our plans to get the hell outta the country
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Nelson christy jack someone reported shots fired must be coming from a equil Christy you know what this means Jack i sure do
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher thinks he should go get revenge again on his enemys but this time worse levi and a couple of poggs men go to track down spicher
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 21:17:20 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile Spicher Brennans Truck
Spicher kate marlett dusty fleming larry ballaton and all of those pissants against me will pay
spicher gets out his gun and loads it as he drives to blue mountain springs subdivison where christy lives
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Patrol Car
Christy tampa atf to dispatcher were on the scene getting ready Jack we half to do our best to bring them down this could have something to do with that drug suation and so what the hell ?
a van is speeding pass by
Levi dammit get ready boys
Christy lets get them dispatcher were on the scene of a chase
4 black jamicans gets out their machine guns
Christy their shooting at us i repeat their shooting at us
jack shoots at the van and shoots one of the black jamican thugs
Christy this is the tampa atf agents youre all under arrest Levi now were surrounded
levi shoots the machine gun at the other tampa atf agents but didnt shoot any of them just shot some of their tampa atf agent patrol cars
levi hits a tree then they all get out of the van
the tampa atf agents shoot at the black jamica thugs christy shoots one of them
the shooting contuines
levi wanders off in time
spicher arrives at larry ballatons house but hides his truck in the bushes
levi shows up and points a gun at spicher
Levi hello there spicher
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter levi demands a resource at spicher and a tampa atf agent arrives and a shoot out goes on and a hostage is on
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 21:26:13 GMT -5
Part 9
Meanwhile Tampa Aquala Park
Nelson whats going on Christy we nailed some of them so far 4 thugs are dead and the leader escaped mustve been poggs Jack all that bald has his motion Nelson if hes bald then thats not poggs thats his accomplaince levi Christy you mean poggs is still at large Nelson yep and spicher is working for them Christy thats one of the part i cant understand
Meanwhile
Levi so tell me something brennan did you really think you could get away with it Spicher you dont know what youre up against Levi oh i do believe me i do since youre learned once i kill ya goodbye brennan
Warner tampa atf agent hold it right there
levi tries to shoot tampa atf agent warner but tampa atf agent warner shoots levi in the chest and ribs killing him
spicher runs
Warner hold it right there
Meanwhile Tampa Aqual Park
Nelson copy that christy that was agent warner he saw levi and levi tried to shoot him but he returned fire and he also saw spicher it seems spicher and levi had some kinda brawl but spicher got away Christy were on to it Jack yep
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
spicher looks in the window and sees kate with a towel wrapped around her after she got out of the shower
Spicher oh baby shes sexier
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher sees that dustys there at the house and spicher knocks on the door and dustys answers it but things go wrong and hostage is on
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 21:29:21 GMT -5
Part 9
Meanwhile Tampa Aquala Park
Nelson whats going on Christy we nailed some of them so far 4 thugs are dead and the leader escaped mustve been poggs Jack all that bald has his motion Nelson if hes bald then thats not poggs thats his accomplaince levi Christy you mean poggs is still at large Nelson yep and spicher is working for them Christy thats one of the part i cant understand
Meanwhile
Levi so tell me something brennan did you really think you could get away with it Spicher you dont know what youre up against Levi oh i do believe me i do since youre learned once i kill ya goodbye brennan
Warner tampa atf agent hold it right there
levi tries to shoot tampa atf agent warner but tampa atf agent warner shoots levi in the chest and ribs killing him
spicher runs
Warner hold it right there
Meanwhile Tampa Aqual Park
Nelson copy that christy that was agent warner he saw levi and levi tried to shoot him but he returned fire and he also saw spicher it seems spicher and levi had some kinda brawl but spicher got away Christy were on to it Jack yep
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
spicher looks in the window and sees kate with a towel wrapped around her after she got out of the shower
Spicher oh baby shes sexier
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher sees that dustys there at the house and spicher knocks on the door and dustys answers it but things go wrong and hostage is on
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 21:40:48 GMT -5
Part 10
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Patrol Car
Christy we have alot on our hands right now Jack and not enough to drop Christy i wish i could but some crooks just never know when to give up Jack even some make lame excuses all the time Christy their posting pictures of poggs on the news already Jack he ll be catched somehow he will Christy yep Jack what did jerry say Christy well hes on the case on the search of poggs murilder Jack yeah
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
Spicher ohhh those were the good ol days me and kate together
spicher sees dusty
Spicher not him yeah flemings there to make sure i wont go anywhere near kate ill find a way
spicher knocks on the door
Kate baby could you get that Dusty sure thing
dusty opens the door but doesnt see anyone
Dusty hello ?
spicher gets out a dart and shoots it at dustys neck
ugh
dustys eyes gets blury then he sees spicher
Dusty *weak voice* you
dusty goes unconcious
Kate dusty who is it oh god
spicher gets out his gun and points it at kate
Spicher sorry dustys asleep right now hello kate time for me and you to take a trip
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher runs after kate as she tries to get away but catches her still and derrick and karen sees them but spicher gets away in time
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 21:50:03 GMT -5
Part 11
Meanwhile Derricks Truck
Derrick baby its good to know this is all cool Karen yeah i know just make sure you dont get to much with that bruce on your jaw Derrick well anything goes
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
Kate get out of here now Spicher my ol mine that sexy body kate Kate ill call the police Spicher how can ya the lines been cut
kate throws something at spicher but misses spicher runs after kate and tackles her
kate screams
Spicher shut up pregnant dog Kate please please get off
kate hits spicher on the forehead with a glass
ugh
Spicher ohhhh *weak voice*
spicher lays on the floor but then he gets up and gets out his gun and goes in kates room as she tries to get out from the window but spicher grabs her
spicher ties her hands up
Spicher shhhh shut up
kate shakes
Spicher lets get on with it Kate no no no help nooooooooooooooo
spicher gets on kates body and rapes her
kates scream echoes
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter derrick and karen arrives at larry ballatons house and seems something they never expected to see and spicher runs again
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 11, 2004 22:14:01 GMT -5
Part 12
Meanwhile Larry Ballatons House
kate rubs her hands against kates body but she still shakes spicher rubs his hands against his body
Spicher i love you baby i love you i always did Kate i i i love you to
spicher smiles
Spicher see we can start all over again hey what the hell ?
spicher sees the kate he had tied was a dummy
Spicher noooooooooooooooo thats it no more mr nice guy
spicher runs out and sees the real kate who escaped outta the window
spicher gets ready to shoot kate
Spicher big mistake baby
dusty then kicks the gun outta spichers hand and shoves spicher against the wall
Dusty did you really thought you could kidnapp kate wrong buster
dusty punches spicher then spicher throws some dirt at dustys face
spicher kicks dusty and kicks him in the face then dusty gets shoved at a tree
but he doesnt go unconcious
spicher grabs kate
Spicher i got you this time Kate get off me help
derrick and karen arrives
Derrick baby stay in the car
spicher runs in his truck and takes off and derrick chases after him
christy and jack arrives
Christy what kate what the hell are yall okay Dusty spicher was here he attacked kate shes okay now Jack we half to catch him Christy he will he wont get away with it this time
TO BE CONCLUDED
Coming up on the next chapter the final is here as derrick and spicher do a showdown
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Mar 12, 2004 12:43:06 GMT -5
Part 13
Meanwhile Tampa Airport
poggs has his suitcase as he gets ready to take the next plane to jamica
Dorell nelson i see him Nelson copy that dorrell stay there im on my way Poggs hurry up
nelson arrives
Dorrell there he is Nelson alright lets get him
nelson walks up towards poggs
Dorrell hello pogs tampa atf Nelson wait wait youre under arrest
nelson handcuffs poggs
Meanwhile Spicher Brennans Truck
Spicher they ll never catch me
derrick arrives and chases after spicher he chases him through a buisness building
the tampa atf agents arrive
Christy lets go
Derrick spicher theres no where to run its over
spicher jumps on derrick
spicher elbows derrick in the ribs and punches him in the nose derrick punches him back derrick kicks spicher
Spicher come on tough guy ill kill ya
spicher tries to get his gun out to shoot derrick but derrick grabs the gun and they struggle then the gun goes off hitting the window then derrick and spicher falls out the window derrick grabs on to a ledge and spicher grabs on to one also
Christy tampa atf oh my god Jack alright yall grab on to our hands Spicher just let me go please Christy spicher we rather see you in prison then to be dead Spicher you dont understand you just dont Derrick you need help spicher big time Spicher did yall think i wanted to be like this i had a wonderful life i was happy untill dusty fleming ruined it
wendy arrives
Wendy spicher spicher Jack hey wait Christy thats spichers sister Wendy hang on spicher Spicher wendy im sorry for everything Wendy i know but just please hang on Spicher i dont wanna go to prison and im not Christy im sorry spicher you have no choice Derrick hurry im slipping
jack grabs on to derricks hand and derrick gets pulled up
Spicher please just dont pull me up Jack come on spicher dont be stuipd Christy grab on to my hand
spicher grabs a knife to try to stab christys hand but christy accidenty lets go of spicher and spicher falls off the balcony to his death wendy is shocked that his brother failed off the balcony she begans to have tears in his eyes
the story goes into no audio
dusty and kate looks as christy tells them spichers dead
THE END
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