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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 23, 2004 15:48:21 GMT -5
It was a warm sunny morning in tampa florida the warm breeze was blowing which means spring is a month away
4 black jamican crackys were discussing something
Poggs the more crack to do the less we ll rid it of course spicher brennan does that job Levi poggs spicher is some creep white american how can we trust him Poggs lets hope he doesnt screw up Levi we ll use these crack on females and we ll mess them up Poggs and if they struggle we ll kill them
dusty walks out and over hears the conversation
Levi we ll get all the crack and use it Poggs and more to come and more to see in tampa
dusty accidently steps on a beer bottle glass
Levi here that over there Poggs hey you
dusty runs off
poggs gets out his gun but it was to late dusty drives off
Levi d**n Poggs did you take pictures markei Markei yes i did Poggs good then we ll get spicher to deal with him
Meanwhile Chamberlaine High School
Kate look go to the police dusty Dusty im planning on doing it Derrick yeah you cant let punks like these get away with it Karen go to the police and they will take care of everything
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter poggs tells spicher to kill the witness and spicher recognizes the picture of the witness and agrees to do it but does it in a different way
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 23, 2004 16:16:54 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Equil
Poggs spicher heres pictures of the witness Spicher who can it be Poggs i dont know this person could go to the police i want you to take care of him and dont fail me
spicher sees the picture of the witness and recongizes him
Poggs what what dammit do you know that person Spicher yes i do so hes the witness ah Poggs correct Spicher ill get him good Poggs fine go get him Spicher ill half to disguise myself i dont want the cops and the tampa atf agents tracking me down im already a fugtive Poggs theres disguises in the back Levi do you trust him Poggs i dont know i dont like the white dude but he better fail me or i will kill him myself
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
Christy all 4 had foreigen accents Dusty yep as weird as it seems Christy hmmm okay we ll look into it Dusty they all were wearing black clothing suits one was wearing one of those hat thingys to keep your ears from being cold Kate yeah its weird
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher does a discussion a different one when he sees dusty and karen talk and decides to kidnapp karen to lure dusty into a trap
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 23, 2004 16:39:57 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
Christy i told jack nelson and the rest about it so they are looking in on it Jerry oh okay Christy we dont tolarate crack people here and they all belong behind bars Jerry agree to that Christy well honey ill go get stuff ready for dinner tonight
Meanwhile Windixie
spicher is driving and guess who he sees at win dixie
Spicher well ill be d**n
spicher sees dusty talking to his sister karen
Dusty ill get me a soda Karen alright
spicher gets his gun out and gets ready
Spicher d**n she looks foxy to bad i half to deal with her
spicher walks up towards karen
karen gasps
Karen can i help you Spicher yes you can
spicher sprays karen with a drug spray and puts a washcloth over her mouth
karen manages to get the washcloth off her
Karen dusty help me help
dusty looks
Dusty hey let go of my sister Spicher sister ?
spichers sunglasses falls off
Dusty spicher
spicher gets out his gun and shoots dusty in the ribs
ugh
Karen dusty oh my god
spicher shoves karen in the truck and ties her up
dusty lays on the concrete with his eyes getting weak
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty is rushed to the hospital and kate vists him and she starts to get tears in his eyes when someone at windixie heard someone mention spicher
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 23, 2004 16:53:31 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Tampa General
doctors nurse gets surgery on dusty
Harnett oh god dusty whats his iq Nurse per 03 Harnett okay
kate and larry walks in
Kate hows he doing Harnett we got the bullet out Kate oh thank god Larry did the bleeding stopped Harnett yes it didnt Kate when will he wake up ? Harnett hopefuly sometime today or tonight Kate so is he gonna be okay Harnett he should
kate gets tears in his eyes and smiles
Kate hes gonna be fine
alan rossard shows up
Alan kate Kate alan what are you doing here Alan didnt you know who shot him Kate no but i know the person kidnapped karen who was it Alan spicher brennan Kate what Larry brennan did this Alan yes someone at windixie heard dusty say spicher Kate hes back for more revenge Alan i hope he ll be okay Kate he will Larry christy said shes gonna get some tampa atf agents to guard him and find karen Alan i hope she gets released safetly
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter kate goes in dustys room and talks to him and she falls asleep when she does a big suprise waits
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 23, 2004 17:28:04 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile Equil
karen is blindfolded
Poggs whos she Spicher well shes the witnesses sister dusty fleming Poggs did u take care of this dusty fleming Spicher i shot him when he said my name Poggs he reconized you Spicher im not gonna lie yes he did and it isnt my fault the wind blew my sunglasses off Poggs excuses excuses but at least you shot him will he live Spicher i shot him in the ribs he shouldnt but if something twists and he makes it and ill finish him off Poggs you better whats your name
karen ignores him
Poggs your name Karen karen fleming Spicher i didnt realize that idiot dusty fleming had such a hot sister Karen what do you want from me ? Spicher not from u from your brother he ruined me he took away kate from me she was my girl Karen so your her ex boyfriend she talked about Spicher correct Karen she might had every right to leave u Spicher please dont say that Karen you better pray my brother is alive because if he dies or if hes dead i swear somehow i will kill you Spicher i wouldnt count on that besides if your brother is alive im a dead man
Meanwhile Tampa General
Harnett okay kate you can go see him Kate thank you
kate walks in dustys hospital room
Kate just look at this way dusty it wasnt to long ago that i was sitting in a hospital room and you were there for me now its my turn baby
kate gets tears in her eyes
Kate i dont know why im crying youre gonna be okay i guess im crying because im happy just happy
kate falls asleep as she lays her head down on dustys hospital bed by his waist
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher hears news that dusty is still alive and spicher hides it from poggs and levi in order to save himself
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 24, 2004 12:36:42 GMT -5
Part 6
spicher was looking at the tv and hears that dusty is still alive
Spicher no it cant be
spicher kicks the tv and it falls down and busts
Poggs what the hell is going on in here Spicher the table hench fail off Poggs well thats just perfect now how are we gonna know if the fleming kid is still alive Spicher i can still find out Poggs no we half to hold back to keep the feds off us
poggs and levi walks out
Meanwhile Tampa General
dusty wakes up and sees kate laying her head on his hospital bed
Dusty what a conquiensence Kate what what how dusty youre awake Dusty yeah baby im awake Kate im so glad
jeremy harnett walks in
Harnett hey little bro you had me worried there Dusty i know but everythings okay Harnett well the bleeding stopped and you ll stay in all this week Dusty you did a good job and tell doctor bowers he also did Harnett i will man hi kate Kate hi doctor harnett
doctor harnett walks out
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher walks in the room karen is locked up in explains stuff to her
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 24, 2004 12:50:21 GMT -5
Part 7
Meanwhile Equil
Spicher you know if people like you would understand Karen youre just blaming people but youreself Spicher no all this is your brothers fault me and kate had a good releationship going and he ruined it he turned kate against me Karen no it wasnt her fault Spicher i dont want to hear it its not simple it will never be untill your brother dies
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
Christy well thats fantastic news kate i know okay love you to bye Jerry whats the good news Christy dusty is gonna be okay hes out of his coma Jerry excellent news there Christy yep
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter spicher and poggs talk and christy does more leads
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 25, 2004 2:04:24 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile Club
Marcus yes michael is here Rikley michael Michael yes rikley Rikley i see you arrived Michael it was a good trip so far
rikley denvis and marcus looks suspicious at michael edge jr
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Christy nelson me and jack came as soon as you called us whats the lead on the aduption Nelson no its about marcus Christy what Nelson someone has a location of his area and its here in tampa were sending out agents and i wont yall to go to Jack we ll be glady to nail that son of a pregnant dog once and for all Nelson i love that talk okay lets move out attention all agents on the edge/marcus case lets move em out
christy and jack walks out
Meanwhile Equil
Levi it will soon be time for brennan to get the money for us Poggs yes i know and when he recives and gives it to us we ll kill him Levi hey i thought u said you wont if he doesnt give u the money well not that i do like the guy i hate the white american ass Poggs i lied i dont work with americans
spicher over hears the conversation
Spicher you have no idea what youre up against poggs we ll see who kills who first
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter marcus and rikley and erik is on to michael about the stuation in the everglades and the bust is on
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 25, 2004 2:34:01 GMT -5
Part 9
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Patrol Car
Christy okay everyone were here at the location foll back Jack theres agent myers
christy and jack gets out of the car
Myers agent ballaton brikers Christy got the transmittor ready Myers yes i do i got the equiqment loaded also goin in Jack okay
Meanwhile Club
Marcus so how was the everglades
michael looks worried
Rikley thats right Marcus you thought i wouldnt know about it didnt you you failed to take control of stuff Michael look i didnt know ballaton set the whole thing up Marcus you didnt think you were to busy saving your own ass to know what ballaton was capble of and of course ballaton is no dummy when it comes to mellding why michael why Michael well i i i you see the thing is look you wouldve know ballaton was gonna do it anyway Marcus its all your fault edge all of it you had to blew this didnt you Michael im sorry Marcus to late for that alright im leaving now with rikley guard the place im gonna let out the platoon
marcus rikley and erik heads out at a secret doorway
kimi watches agent myers from a bush
kimi radios one of the guards
agent myers looks in the door
one of the guards points a gun at agent myers hand
Guard put your hands up get in there
Jack uh o christy they got myers their on to us
Guard look who i found wondering around the door Michael huh whos this Guard hes a transmittor Michael is that so you made a big mistake mister youre a tampa atf agent
michael shoots agent myers in the chest with his gun killing him
kimi tries to shoot agent brikers from on the roof with her sniper gun but christy points a gun at her head
Christy drop it
kim smiles and turns around and tries to kick christy but christy uses karate on her and they both use karate but christy was the strongest
christy elbows kimi in the nose
Christy had enough Kimi never Christy okay
kimi runs and puts her leg in the air to try to kick christy but she loses her balance and kimi falls off the roof onto the concrete killing herself
Christy bad choice sister bad choice
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter jack brikers heads in to arrest michael edge but they were to late
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Feb 25, 2004 2:55:14 GMT -5
Part 10
Meanwhile Club
Michael d**n i had enough of this enough of this
then agent jack brikers busts in the door so do other agents
Jack tampa atf youre all under arrest
the guard tries to shoot jack but shoots him in the chest killing him and shoots the 3 thugs killing them
agent jack brikers shoves michael edge against the chair
Jack its over edge youre under arrest wheres the platoon Michael youre to late its already being released
jack radios christy
Jack christy we got edge marcus mustve bailed out Christy im on my way
jack radios nelson
Jack dispatcher give note to nelson that we got michael edge but marcus bailed along with the platoon Dispatcher copy that
10 minutes later
Christy i waited so long for this but now youre gonna tell me where the platoon is at Michael what platoon
jack laughs and scoofs
Jack youre patheic you know that edge
christy punches michael in the eye
ugh
Christy naughty naughty edge Jack so are you gonna tell us where it is Michael i cant Christy why why cant you huh why
michael doesnt respond
Jack are you afraid to tell us Christy look we can protect you Michael can you protect my wife and 2 kids Christy of course Michael why should i believe you and maybe my dad will take care of this all Christy your dad is no where to be contacted hes also wanted of course now im gonna give you one last chance to tell me where the platoon is at Michael go to hell
christy grabs michaels jaw
Christy jack
jack gets out his pocket knife and srapes and stabs michael edge in the arm with it
michael screams
then michael goes unconcious i didnt say killing him because i dont know if someone can die from being stab in the arm or not
marcus is driving to the madison inn hotel
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack goes to the hotel christy contacts hotel manager paulson about the platoon warning to invacate the hotel
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