The Secret Admire

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Part 1

It was a cool sunny morning in tampa florida traffic was busy and kids off to school

Meanwhile Chamberlaine High School

karen fleming was heading to her locker when she opened it a note and some flowers and fudge were in it and a heart and a note to her was from a secret admire

Karen
what ummmm oh

3 minutes later

Derrick
baby listen i did not send that note to you
Karen
well i dont care if ya did it was sweet
Derrick
and since i didnt do it someone here has a crush on you
Karen
are you sure u didnt
Derrick
postive
Karen
that means someone is stalking me
Derrick
if thats true if i find out who didnt ill break them

Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station

Jack
hey nelson christy yall sure take a look at this
Christy
whats up
Jack
something we found look this is marcus zyder he coperates terriosts orginations in 1995 him and michael edge met in a deal on some roony thingy in califorina
Christy
so hes the one who had that dealing with
Jack
most likely yes

Meanwhile Chamberlaine High School

Dusty
d**n who would be your secret admire sis someone out there hahaha
Karen
i dont think its very funny at all
Kate
oh come on karen im asumming this person is not stalking you
Karen
derrick is sure that its a stalker

TO BE CONTUINED

Coming up on the next chapter karen wants derrick to find out who sent her that note and michael calls marcus up on the deal

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Part 2

Meanwhile Chamberlaine High School

Karen
um derrick listen please find out who sent me that note
Derrick
i will be glady to
Karen
its creepy
Derrick
dont worry whoever sent it wont away with it when i get my hands on them
Karen
thanks

derrick and karen kiss each other

Meanwhile Warehouse

michael edge gets on his cell phone with marcus

Marcus
hello
Michael
its me
Marcus
you got the radiation platoon
Michael
yes and we will be fowarding our postion
Marcus
excellent when you get done get back to
Michael
i will

michael hangs up the cell phone

TO BE CONTUINED

Coming up on the next chapter valatines day here and karen is watching her own back derrick protects her dusty tells karen she is overacting

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Part 3

Meanwhile Lunchroom Patio

Kate
nice valatine card karen
Karen
thanks ohhhh
Dusty
karen i think youre overacting if someone has a crush on you so what that doesnt make them a stalker manuallty
Karen
well it makes them something
Kate
karen come on
Karen
derrick is anxious to find out who sent me those flowers candy and note
Dusty
hey hey now dont jump to conclusions
Kate
yeah maybe your secret admire will revill himself
Dusty
just give it some space sis
Karen
if you say so

Meanwhile Larry Ballatons Supermarket Center

larry was in his office

Larry
okay that will do
Denise
hey larry
Larry
oh hey denise how was the denist appointment
Denise
very good he gave me free crest toothpaste im such a good woman
Larry
beat that huh
Denise
how was virgina
Larry
very cold my dad died of old age my mom worthing over how happy she was to see me same with my brother
Denise
oh

TO BE CONTUINED

Coming up on the next chapter karens secret admire comes forward to dusty and kate and derrick overhears the conversation then david starts to run

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Part 4

Meanwhile Chamberlaine High School

the bell was ringing for everyone to go home

david walks up towards kate and dusty

David
hey can i talk to yall
Dusty
yeah sure david whats up
David
i got a full confession to make i was the one who sent that note to your sister
Kate
oh
Dusty
well its all good
Derrick
no it isnt good so youre the one who sent her that note
Kate
derrick dont do anything youre going to regret
Derrick
come here punk you think its funny to go get some other persons girlfriend
Dusty
derrick leave him alone

dusty pulls derrick back

Kate
derrick davids a good person
Derrick
no hes not hes a retard
David
now listen derrick im sorry i got you pissed off but i happened to like karen shes real pretty
Derrick
stay away from her or youre gonna be sorry
Dusty
no threats okay
Derrick
dammit

david walks off

Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House

Christy
well everythings like bent out of shape eversince my sister was in the hospital
Jerry
its been a drag
Christy
very

larry ballaton walks in

Larry
sorry was i interupting anything
Christy
nope dad
Larry
came by and returned the waffle maker
Christy
thanks dad

TO BE CONTUINED

Coming up on the next chapter michael edge makes his plans to leave the country when the radiation platoon is released

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Part 5

Meanwhile Alley Bar

Michael
i need a protion i got to get out of the country before its released
Marcus
i will work out the plans
Michael
excellent
Marcus
what about logan gryer the person who was dealing with
Michael
hes dead
Marcus
okay
Michael
this little platoon knows and feels its way
Marcus
indeed it does
Michael
matually

marcus's cell phone rings

Marcus
yes *marcus speaks asian*

Meanwhile

dusty was riding in his honda and kate was riding in her red farrai

kate gets on her cell phone to dusty

Dusty
yeah
Kate
hey you gonna tell karen who sent her the note
Dusty
yeah david told me to tell her
Kate
i wonder what her reaction is gonna be
Dusty
i think shes was just getting over david but ill make her understand
Kate
yeah okay
Dusty
hey wanna go to mcdonalds with me
Kate
no i think ill crash when i get home
Dusty
ok
Kate
but ill defiently go tommrow
Dusty
okau bye

TO BE CONTUINED

Coming up on the next chapter dusty tells karen but derrick already told her and dusty has a long talk with karen about it

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Part 6

dusty drives to derricks house

Dusty
hey karen can i talk to ya um do
Derrick
i told her already
Karen
why why why why
Dusty
derrick im gonna talk to my sister in private
Derrick
go ahead ill be inside
Dusty
now karen david has a crush on you
Karen
i was just getting over how cool he was and he pulls something like this
Dusty
remember what i told you that davids been through alot
Karen
yeah well i maybe hint a little emotion on him
Dusty
he was shot in the arm by these goons and his dad had to kill them
Karen
i guess i can like him
Dusty
now im gonna talk to derrick about david on how hes been through alot but not today but i dont want you to tell him yet
Karen
okay

TO BE CONTUINED

Coming up on the next chapter kate heads home and tells larry about karens secret admire and who it was