Post by theflemingrancho1 on Apr 8, 2012 10:01:46 GMT -5
Here's a story i did before, the original however i felt it sucked because i rushed through it. So now i did a reboot version as part of the third installment to the spike the hawk story special series. and also the first story special title to count as an episode.
Spike the Hawk Planet Kritian Cast
Episode 198th
Spike the Hawk
Judith the Kritian
Stephine Rosewater Patterson
Ton Patterson
Rachel Petrelli
Silas Novick
John Paul Valley
Bradley Patterson
Laura Baker
Detective Joleen
Dr Orochi Takaki
Other Cast
Candice Weathersthingy
Tony Lesner
Travis Decker
Patrica Biazz
Kristina
Miyuki Yasu Kappler
Jerry Kappler
Agent Clark Snyder
Asami Misako
Special Guest Stars Family Members of characters cast (whenever they appear on the episodes they will appear on)
Amy Reeves (candice weathersthingys sister)
Marie Joleen (detective joleens mom)
Rupert Joleen (detective joleens dad)
Kyla Reeves (candice weathersthingys niece)
Carlos Reeves (candice's brother in law)
Guest Starring Kana Otonashi
Ryu Koichi
Sora Watashi
Ridge Parkman
3 Days later
Japan
Shinkansen
also known as the bullet train operated by four Japan Railway Group Companies
spike is seen writing in his journal
the journal said after what we learned about vazard and his aborbastion ability it is not like a plant monster digestive system because vazard is a artifical alien created being its tail sucks up his victims like a vacum cleaner once the victim is half or fully inside his some gooey loogie that melts the flesh of his victims thats why it is different from a plant monster digestive system
Spike : what a fast train
someone knocks on spikes private room
Spike : its open
Patrica : hi
Spike : hi
Patrica : Can i come in?
Spike : sure
Patrica : Thank you, what a lovely view
Spike : Yeah thats one of the cool things about trains.
Patrica : candice told me she has rode on one of these bullet trains before, she said suzette took some pretty pictures. I took my camera to I think I'll take some good photos and see if my boyfriend shayne would enjoy them to. and will get some cool stuff from my mom,
Spike : sounds like you got a shopping list then.
Patrica : And a to do list. of course i know the main focus of this vacaction is business
Spike : No it's both we just got to find these ancient kritian temples that the kritian mages used to warp to their new planet
Patrica : So what do we know about the mages so far besides that they have elvin like ears?
Spike : Theirs a history we may find out in tokyo on them
Patrica : exploring temples will be a treat and good pictures, of course I'll text my mom the pics of the kritian temple.
Spike : she will find that interesting
Patrica : if only shayne came I don't think this stuff would interest him but he would somehow find it enjoyable of course he has to work so he couldn't come with us anyway
Spike : We got some picture to take for us
Patrica : Oh this will be exciting
bradley and stephine are seen holding hands
Stephine : Feels strange you know traveling in a plane, Planes feel slow to me
Bradley : You're just not use of doing what us humans do
Stephine : i suppose thats the case
Bradley : though they said this train is faster then a plane, And i say it is.
Stephine : I agree with you on that dear
Bradley : we got enough money for ton and rachel to get their own private room here while spike and patrica paid for their own
Stephine : the service is nice on this train
Bradley : I know
a female japanese cafetrina attendent brings bradley and stephine some tea
Female Japanese Cafertina Attendent : Tea Ball?
Bradley : Oh thank you
Stephine : thank you very much
the female japanese cafertina attendent bows
Female Japanese Cafertina Attendent : you are welcome
the female japanese cafertina attendent walks off
Bradley : smells good ah yes
bradley continues looking at the cup
Stephine : if you're done smelling it perhaps you should drink it?
Bradley : just getting use of the good smell to it.
Stephine : So this must be Tamaryokucha
Bradley : wow it tastes great
Stephine : They really did a good job with this.
Bradley : So stephine since this is your first time also out of the US you think you'll have trouble understanding some of the japanese?
Stephine : Maybe or maybe not it depends i think spike is hiring a translator just in case.
Bradley : He got one step forward with that plan huh
Stephine : yes.
Ton and Rachel's Private Room
a male japanese cafertina attendent knocks on the door
Ton : come on in
Japanese Male Cafertina Attendent : good afternoon you 2
the japanese male cafertina attendent bows
Ton : good afternoon good kind sir
Rachel : How are you today ?
Japanese Male Cafertina Attendent : I'm doing fine thank you how about you 2 are you enjoying our beautiful country and view?
Ton : we love it.
Rachel : we sure are thank you,
Japanese Male Cafertina Attendent : heres some Tamaryokucha for you both
Ton : thank you sir,
Rachel : thank you
the japanese male cafertina attendent bows and walks out
ton and rachel smile at each other
Rachel : hey that smells good.
Ton : yeah let's drink some of it
ton and rachel begin drinking the tamaryokucha
Ton : fruity
Rachel : wow this must have a berry flavor and other fruit flavors in it.
Ton : oh i know that won't be nothing to compare once we start to eat the fancy food in tokyo
Rachel : wow that was amazing flying in a plane.
Ton : awww you mean you prefer that type of flight over mine?
Rachel : oh of course not silly. its just i never been on a plane before. but yours is top 1 though tehehe you jealous over a airplane you're silly
rachel kisses ton a dozen of times
Ton : would you like a hug with that?
ton and rachel hug each other
Rachel : lets have a good time there and take some plenty of good photos I'll even have some sent to mom and harvey i emailed her to told her we'll be in japan for a week or 2
Ton : cool
Rachel : patrica wants to socalize with the civilans of tokyo , She's so excited.
Ton : yep because its her first time in japan same with us.
Tokyo Japan
A Courthouse
a male japanese dr named orochi is seen in the court room along with a male japanese mental insane criminal immate and a female japanese lawyer
Orochi : In my opinion, Mr Ryu Koichi. is as much a danger to himself as to others......and prison is probably not the best environment for his rehabilitation.
the male japanese mental insane criminal immate starts smiling and the female japanese lawyer looks angry
Female Japanese Lawyer : *sigh*
later on after the court room hearing the female lawyer walks up towards orochi
Female Japanese Lawyer : Dr Orochi
Orochi : yes ms Otonashi?
Female Japanese Lawyer : You think a man who butchers people for the mob doesn't belong in jail?
Orochi : I would hardly have testified to that otherwise, would I?
Kana : This is the third of Silas Novick's thugs you've had declared insane......and moved into your asylum.
Orochi : The work offered by organized crime must have an attraction to the insane.
Kana : or the corrupt
Orochi : Mr Watashi
a male japanese district attorney named sora watashi looks at orochi
Orochi : You should check with Miss Otonashi here.....just what implications your office has authorized her to make. If any.
sora watashi walks up towards kana as orochi takaki walks off
Sora : What are you doing?
Kana : What are you doing, Sora?
Sora : Looking out for you. Novick and his company has half the city bought and paid for. just drop it
Kana : How can you say that?
Sora Look it's just for right now Because as much as I care about nailing Novick and his company, I care more about you.
Kana : That's sweet.
kana kisses sora on the forehead
Kana : But We've been through all that.
Novick & Co
silas novick the main villian of spike the hawk planet kritian is seen looking out the window on top of the 20th floor while drinking a glass of burbon
Silas : have they got started with it?
Silas's Thug 1 : yes boss they did.
Silas : good then
silas's mobile phone rings
Silas : yes silas novick
Silas's Thug 2 : sir parkman got away
Silas : Dammit, his memory must've came back.
Silas's Thug 2 : you want me to get some of the boys and take him out
Silas : No don't worry about it i got an another idea but thanks though.
silas hangs up the mobile phone then his office phone rings
Silas : yes?
Orochi : hi it's me we need to talk, meet me at the Otako tonight.
Silas : Okay you got it.
silas hangs up his office phone
a unknown young female japanese person walks up behind silas
Silas : Hey i was about to call ya silence ridge perkins for me will ya asami?
the unknown young female japanese person bows at silas
Asami : yes father
asami then does a backflip into the elevator as the elevator opens and uses it
Spike the Hawk Planet Kritian Cast
Episode 198th
Spike the Hawk
Judith the Kritian
Stephine Rosewater Patterson
Ton Patterson
Rachel Petrelli
Silas Novick
John Paul Valley
Bradley Patterson
Laura Baker
Detective Joleen
Dr Orochi Takaki
Other Cast
Candice Weathersthingy
Tony Lesner
Travis Decker
Patrica Biazz
Kristina
Miyuki Yasu Kappler
Jerry Kappler
Agent Clark Snyder
Asami Misako
Special Guest Stars Family Members of characters cast (whenever they appear on the episodes they will appear on)
Amy Reeves (candice weathersthingys sister)
Marie Joleen (detective joleens mom)
Rupert Joleen (detective joleens dad)
Kyla Reeves (candice weathersthingys niece)
Carlos Reeves (candice's brother in law)
Guest Starring Kana Otonashi
Ryu Koichi
Sora Watashi
Ridge Parkman
3 Days later
Japan
Shinkansen
also known as the bullet train operated by four Japan Railway Group Companies
spike is seen writing in his journal
the journal said after what we learned about vazard and his aborbastion ability it is not like a plant monster digestive system because vazard is a artifical alien created being its tail sucks up his victims like a vacum cleaner once the victim is half or fully inside his some gooey loogie that melts the flesh of his victims thats why it is different from a plant monster digestive system
Spike : what a fast train
someone knocks on spikes private room
Spike : its open
Patrica : hi
Spike : hi
Patrica : Can i come in?
Spike : sure
Patrica : Thank you, what a lovely view
Spike : Yeah thats one of the cool things about trains.
Patrica : candice told me she has rode on one of these bullet trains before, she said suzette took some pretty pictures. I took my camera to I think I'll take some good photos and see if my boyfriend shayne would enjoy them to. and will get some cool stuff from my mom,
Spike : sounds like you got a shopping list then.
Patrica : And a to do list. of course i know the main focus of this vacaction is business
Spike : No it's both we just got to find these ancient kritian temples that the kritian mages used to warp to their new planet
Patrica : So what do we know about the mages so far besides that they have elvin like ears?
Spike : Theirs a history we may find out in tokyo on them
Patrica : exploring temples will be a treat and good pictures, of course I'll text my mom the pics of the kritian temple.
Spike : she will find that interesting
Patrica : if only shayne came I don't think this stuff would interest him but he would somehow find it enjoyable of course he has to work so he couldn't come with us anyway
Spike : We got some picture to take for us
Patrica : Oh this will be exciting
bradley and stephine are seen holding hands
Stephine : Feels strange you know traveling in a plane, Planes feel slow to me
Bradley : You're just not use of doing what us humans do
Stephine : i suppose thats the case
Bradley : though they said this train is faster then a plane, And i say it is.
Stephine : I agree with you on that dear
Bradley : we got enough money for ton and rachel to get their own private room here while spike and patrica paid for their own
Stephine : the service is nice on this train
Bradley : I know
a female japanese cafetrina attendent brings bradley and stephine some tea
Female Japanese Cafertina Attendent : Tea Ball?
Bradley : Oh thank you
Stephine : thank you very much
the female japanese cafertina attendent bows
Female Japanese Cafertina Attendent : you are welcome
the female japanese cafertina attendent walks off
Bradley : smells good ah yes
bradley continues looking at the cup
Stephine : if you're done smelling it perhaps you should drink it?
Bradley : just getting use of the good smell to it.
Stephine : So this must be Tamaryokucha
Bradley : wow it tastes great
Stephine : They really did a good job with this.
Bradley : So stephine since this is your first time also out of the US you think you'll have trouble understanding some of the japanese?
Stephine : Maybe or maybe not it depends i think spike is hiring a translator just in case.
Bradley : He got one step forward with that plan huh
Stephine : yes.
Ton and Rachel's Private Room
a male japanese cafertina attendent knocks on the door
Ton : come on in
Japanese Male Cafertina Attendent : good afternoon you 2
the japanese male cafertina attendent bows
Ton : good afternoon good kind sir
Rachel : How are you today ?
Japanese Male Cafertina Attendent : I'm doing fine thank you how about you 2 are you enjoying our beautiful country and view?
Ton : we love it.
Rachel : we sure are thank you,
Japanese Male Cafertina Attendent : heres some Tamaryokucha for you both
Ton : thank you sir,
Rachel : thank you
the japanese male cafertina attendent bows and walks out
ton and rachel smile at each other
Rachel : hey that smells good.
Ton : yeah let's drink some of it
ton and rachel begin drinking the tamaryokucha
Ton : fruity
Rachel : wow this must have a berry flavor and other fruit flavors in it.
Ton : oh i know that won't be nothing to compare once we start to eat the fancy food in tokyo
Rachel : wow that was amazing flying in a plane.
Ton : awww you mean you prefer that type of flight over mine?
Rachel : oh of course not silly. its just i never been on a plane before. but yours is top 1 though tehehe you jealous over a airplane you're silly
rachel kisses ton a dozen of times
Ton : would you like a hug with that?
ton and rachel hug each other
Rachel : lets have a good time there and take some plenty of good photos I'll even have some sent to mom and harvey i emailed her to told her we'll be in japan for a week or 2
Ton : cool
Rachel : patrica wants to socalize with the civilans of tokyo , She's so excited.
Ton : yep because its her first time in japan same with us.
Tokyo Japan
A Courthouse
a male japanese dr named orochi is seen in the court room along with a male japanese mental insane criminal immate and a female japanese lawyer
Orochi : In my opinion, Mr Ryu Koichi. is as much a danger to himself as to others......and prison is probably not the best environment for his rehabilitation.
the male japanese mental insane criminal immate starts smiling and the female japanese lawyer looks angry
Female Japanese Lawyer : *sigh*
later on after the court room hearing the female lawyer walks up towards orochi
Female Japanese Lawyer : Dr Orochi
Orochi : yes ms Otonashi?
Female Japanese Lawyer : You think a man who butchers people for the mob doesn't belong in jail?
Orochi : I would hardly have testified to that otherwise, would I?
Kana : This is the third of Silas Novick's thugs you've had declared insane......and moved into your asylum.
Orochi : The work offered by organized crime must have an attraction to the insane.
Kana : or the corrupt
Orochi : Mr Watashi
a male japanese district attorney named sora watashi looks at orochi
Orochi : You should check with Miss Otonashi here.....just what implications your office has authorized her to make. If any.
sora watashi walks up towards kana as orochi takaki walks off
Sora : What are you doing?
Kana : What are you doing, Sora?
Sora : Looking out for you. Novick and his company has half the city bought and paid for. just drop it
Kana : How can you say that?
Sora Look it's just for right now Because as much as I care about nailing Novick and his company, I care more about you.
Kana : That's sweet.
kana kisses sora on the forehead
Kana : But We've been through all that.
Novick & Co
silas novick the main villian of spike the hawk planet kritian is seen looking out the window on top of the 20th floor while drinking a glass of burbon
Silas : have they got started with it?
Silas's Thug 1 : yes boss they did.
Silas : good then
silas's mobile phone rings
Silas : yes silas novick
Silas's Thug 2 : sir parkman got away
Silas : Dammit, his memory must've came back.
Silas's Thug 2 : you want me to get some of the boys and take him out
Silas : No don't worry about it i got an another idea but thanks though.
silas hangs up the mobile phone then his office phone rings
Silas : yes?
Orochi : hi it's me we need to talk, meet me at the Otako tonight.
Silas : Okay you got it.
silas hangs up his office phone
a unknown young female japanese person walks up behind silas
Silas : Hey i was about to call ya silence ridge perkins for me will ya asami?
the unknown young female japanese person bows at silas
Asami : yes father
asami then does a backflip into the elevator as the elevator opens and uses it