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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 9, 2004 15:33:56 GMT -5
Part 1
THE STORY THUS SO FAR
It was a hot sunny afternoon in tampa florida traffic was busy and kids were getting ready to return to school but whats this a car on fire after a explosin
dusty was on the ground moaning
Dusty ughhhhhhh ughhhh my hands ughhhh David dusty what happened dusty Dusty go get help david David i cant see a thing Dusty the explosin mustve blinded you okay dusty my hands have been burnt and they friggin hurt and james ballaton is unocncious lets go call an amubelence
dusty limps and david grabs ahold to him
Man what the hell ? Dusty hey help ughhhh my hands Man oh my god David theres another person on the ground unconcious and the person who was in that car is dead Man okay ill go an amublence Dusty david dude it may not matter but ughhh my hands they they ughhhh David dusty if youre about to go unconcious dont because i cant see you Man okay the amulence is on its way Dusty i dont know what im going to tell karen that her boyfriend just died in a explosin in a flash
Meanwhile Tampa Bay Mall
Kate wow look at all the stuff we got Karen yeah to bad i couldnt make derrick come he hates to go to the mall actually
karens cell phone rings
Karen hello ? hi christy what what um are they okay i see and no no it but so the car exploded Kate what happened Karen well well kate your sister wants wants to talk to you you *karen bursts tears from her eyes* Kate christy what happened whys karen oh my god derrick oh no dustys hurt but he david we ll be there bye
kate hugs karen
Karen hes dead oh god nooooo Kate its okay listen we need to be strong okay their going to find out who did it now lets go to the hospital
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack head to the hospital so does larry and kate karen arrive also so does davids parents and christy gets in contact with derricks parents
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 9, 2004 15:55:09 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Tampa General
Paramedics okay we got one an explosin here Harnett dusty what happened ? Dusty their was an explosin at derricks house derrick is dead my hands they hurt and david hes blind from the explosin and james ballaton hes unconcious Harnett okay david you go in there okay ill look at you later alright lets get to work
christy and jack arrives
Christy Hey wheres my brother how is he Bowers hes stable
larry arrives
Larry wheres my son how is he Christy hes going to be okay Larry oh finally
stacy and danny arrives
Stacy wheres my son huh where is he Christy hes blind Stacy what how Christy the explosin Danny if it was just a explosin then its temporany Christy perhaps Oh boy heres karen with kate Kate dustys okay Christy so far why isnt karen coming Kate hey karen shes upset about derrick Christy poor girl Jack well we know this is connected to his drugging in the tampa slumber house Christy yep so those son of a pregnant doges finished the job
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack will make sure the people reponsble will be brought to justice and karen finds a recent video of derrick which gets leads on who murdered him
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 9, 2004 16:21:32 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile Tampa General
kate walks in dustys room
Kate hey Dusty hey Kate how are your hands ? Dusty they dont hurt that much now im lucky they only burnt to the flesh part but barely Kate oh james over there Dusty yeah hes gonna be okay did you see david Kate not yet your brother is checking his vision bis parents are there also Dusty oh and it must be tough for karen Kate yeah Dusty she loved him very much Kate yeah and their making funeuarl plans this week Dusty ill be outta the hospital tommrow so ill go to the funuearl Kate im glad i didnt lose you Dusty me to Stacy how long is he going to stay blind Harnett it actually lasts 3 weeks David 3 weeks thats a long time Harnett i know and im sorry i wish their was more of something i could do Danny you did what you thought was best Harnett i know David well this is gonna be a not so nice weeks for me
stacy hugs david
Meanwhile Karen Flemings House
karen was going through derricks belongings and she sees a video tape that saids july 31th 2004
karen puts the video in
Derrick hey everyone and karen by time yall read this ill be murdered yes i said murder and i know who did it to remember the 2 miltary sargents who wanted me to join the army because i turned down the invitatin to join it well these guys turned out to be crooks miltary terriost orginations so i know who murdered me and now christy since youre part of the tampa atf agents you ll know who did it because i do but now since they finished their job after their job failed during the night at the tampa slumber house justice should be serve and karen take care girl when i first met you you were really the fine and sexy looking chick in middle school remember when i first kissed you yeah hehehehehe i can tell youre crying now believe me i wish i could to but a mans got to be a man hehehehehehe and those nights we spent together and you in my arms meant alot to me and christy if youre watching also or youre going to watch soon remember the pieces to the puzzle on my murder and dusty you rock man you take care of that sexy chick sister of yours she ll need it since her favorite only boyfriend is dead and kate youre a wonderful person you speak highly of karen since yall both are red hair chicks and dusty im not getting fresh with her if youre watching hahahahahaha and david i know i hated you one time but i never meant any of it to happened im sorry and i know i told you that already but still youre cool well this is it for my message goodbye karen i love you heres my message ill leave for you
karen smiles and crys
then she wents to call christy
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy jack and kate comes and sees derricks video will at karens house which makes christy and jack track down the criminals the easy way and kate calls dusty and tells him about derricks video will and when he gets outta the hospital he will look at it
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 11, 2004 2:02:23 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Karen Flemings House
christy jack and kate arrives
Jack well thats it theirs our lead Christy yep it seems derrick somehow knew they were planning his own murder Kate this could mean Christy yes and thank you derrick whereever you are Kate wow wait untill dusty heres about this Karen yeah Christy why dont you call him Kate you know what thats what ill do
kate calls dusty
Meanwhile Tampa General
Dusty thats great listen yall record a copy i want to look at it when i get out tommrow James what Dusty oh and james ballaton just now woked up Kate christy james is awake Christy tell him ill talk to him tommrow Kate christy will talk to james tommrow Dusty okay well bye James dusty is that you ? Dusty yeah James how are you Dusty fine and tired James is david okay ? Dusty the explosin made him lost his vision and my hands got burnt but they stop hurting James what was it you were on the phone about Dusty you ll find out tommrow
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter david dusty james gets out of the hospital and christy and jack make plans with nelson to track down the miltary crooks and derricks parents goes to talk to nelson
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 11, 2004 2:14:43 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile Travers House
stacy helps david in the house
David at least i wont be blind forever Stacy i know and also you ll get your vision back by time ill have the baby David of course i will Danny listen david you go take a rest okay Jimmy hey david how are you ? David bad question Jimmy sorry man i know
jimmy hugs his brother
David thanks jimmy Jimmy listen if you need any help ask me or mom and dad okay David okay Stacy so what brings you back from college Jimmy you really dont want me around do ya Stacy oh no we didnt mean that
stacy hugs jimmy
Danny how are things Jimmy their okay and groovy Stacy ill have the baby in late september Jimmy ill be back to vist then Danny hey wanna spin the night Jimmy sure david needs alot of help im not trying to baby him but still
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
captain brock nelson was doing some work in his office
derricks parents walks in his office
Richard well Nelson mr and ms larkins Rhonda did you find our sons killer Nelson were doing everything in our power to Richard i know he was old enough but he shouldntve went to that tampa slumber house Nelson yes its connected to the drug part Rhonda yall need to try hard to find whoever did this Nelson believe me ma'am were trying Rhonda try harder Richard derrick is the first son we lost well his grandpa died 5 years ago
nelsons cell phone rings
Nelson hello what thats good news maybe hes i see okay meet me here
nelson hangs up the phone
Richard is that about my son ? Nelson yes and its good news about who murdered him yall might want to watch your sons will also
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter nelson sends derrick larkins parents to derricks house to watch a video will and dusty sees the copy of derricks will at his house
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 11, 2004 2:34:23 GMT -5
Part 6
Meanwhile Dusty Flemings House
dusty looks at a copy video of derricks will
karen walks in
Dusty so good to be true
dusty sees her sister karen crying on the sofa
dusty goes over to her sister and comforts her
Dusty its okay its okay Karen i miss him
karen lays her head down on dustys shoulder still crying and dusty and karen hug each other
Dusty i know sis i know you do just let it all out Karen why him why we had oh im just to to *still crys* Dusty i know youre just to upset to say its okay but you know what Karen what Dusty im lucky to have you for a sister Karen really ? Dusty of course why wouldnt i be Karen its just that you never said that to me before Dusty well im saying it now Karen and youre the best d**n brother i have *still crys* but i cant still stop crying Dusty i know you dont half to just stop when you feel like its all let out of your system
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
christy and jack arrives
Nelson okay i sent derricks parents to look at that video will yall found Christy okay Nelson also we got leads on our 2 returning miltary sgts Jack yep look at these pictures Christy we got em Nelson and i say lets go get them right now
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter sgt boyers and sgt kivers is about to leave tampa but things go wrong also karen decides to spend the night with dusty for a few days and dusty tells kate karens problems
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 12, 2004 19:11:19 GMT -5
Part 7
Meanwhile Dusty Flemings House
dusty is on the phone with kate
Dusty well she didnt cry her eyes to sleep she stopped later on Kate poor thing Dusty well after derrick told me to watch after her and since shes my sister i half to do that anyway Kate she needs you and us but mostly you your her family Dusty yeah i know Kate well its been a hetic day i think ill take a nap myself Dusty okay i love you Kate i love you to
Meanwhile Tampa Airport
sgt boyers and sgt kivers get their tickets
Boyers yes 2 tickets to pheildpa Agent yes sir its all ready Boyers fine thanks
the ticket agent calls captain brock nelson
Agent captain nelson hes here Nelson okay we ll get them
Kivers that was easy Boyers yeah and we ll make our leads from there and we ll send another inivation to join the army to someone Kivers yeah Boyers why dont you go see if its clear Kivers okay
captain brock nelson jack and christy sourround boyers and kivers
Nelson freeze tampa atf agents Kivers lets get outta here Boyers okay
kivers shoots at the tampa atf agents and they shoot back
Boyers we ll split up Kivers alright
boyers and kivers splits up
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter they chase ends at the tampa airport and danny and stacy still do their sex some more and to celebrate their upcoming baby
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 12, 2004 19:25:54 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile Travers House
danny was rubbing his wife stacy travers feet
Stacy a little more on all over mmmm yeah thats better Danny my beatiful wife about to give birth again to one more travers kid im such a lucky dad am i a lucky husband Stacy and im your lucky wife lucky mom Danny its so progical and of course a tropical storm Stacy yeah thats one way of putting it Danny i love you Stacy i love you to
tracy walks in
Tracy not again yall cant yall give it a rest yall do that stuff like yall not really married married couple argue Danny but the true ones love their wifes Tracy right dad Danny well new kid coming
danny kisses stacys foot
stacy laughs
Stacy that tickles hahahaahhahahaa
danny still rubs stacys feet
Meanwhile Tampa Airport
kivers sees a border trailer
sgt kivers gets out his gun
Kivers open up dammit open the d**n door Worker what the hell
sgt kivers points his gun at thw worker
Worker nuts Jack tampa atf agents freeze
sgt kivers shoots at jack but misses and jack shoots sgt kivers in the ribs then sgt kivers falls off the balcony killing him
Jack captain nelson suspect down i repeat suspect down Nelson okay brikers im on my way
sgt boyers runs to near a fence but he tried to climb over but it was sourrounded by sharp wires
sgt boyers scrapes himself in the arm with one
arghhhh
Boyers dammit Christy hold it right there sgt boyers Boyers christy ballaton how good it is to see you again Christy put your hands over your head nelson brikers suspect in custody
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy ballaton arrests sgt boyers and she tells him was derrick worth it and he admits him and boyers were the only crooked miltary people
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 12, 2004 19:37:24 GMT -5
Part 9
Meanwhile Tampa Airport
Christy were they worth it was the college student worth it Boyers well thats what happens when you refuse to join the army Christy that did not give you the right to kill those innocent people hell you even kill the college students girlfriend Boyers we killed her because she was a witness to her boyfriends death we had no choice Christy was derrick also worth it Boyers i dont know Christy stay there Boyers i was in vitanam in the 60s i fought and killed some vitenaemse i fought for my country i am a vitenam vetren i have rights Christy rights to kill someone i dont think so Boyers it amazes me you know some girl like you acting ol snobby and bad you think you really have it in you
christy hits sgt boyers in the nose with her gun
ugh
sgt boyers nose bleeds
christy puts her foot on sgt boyers neck
Christy im warning you if you say one more word like that again im warning you my foot is very powerful enough to snap your neck with one press against it and CRACK
christy chokes sgt boyers with her foot
Boyers agh i was right but i dont think you ll Jack christy Nelson you got him Christy what about sgt kivers ? Jack hes dead Christy well we got one suspect in custody when we get to the station you d**n well better tell me if theirs more then just you and kivers
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter boyers admits him and kivers worked alone and their general boss had no idea of what crimes they were commiting and christy leaves the tampa atf agent station to vist derricks coffin with jerry and things go wrong at the tampa atf agent station
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 12, 2004 19:55:55 GMT -5
Part 10
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Christy so theirs just you 2 no other people working Boyers nope it was just me and kivers Christy i see Boyers we had to do it some youngsters been turning down an inivitation to join the army so someone had to teach them a lesson Christy youre patheic Boyers proud of it to Christy thats nothing to be proud about
christy walks out
Jack you okay ? Christy yeah i guess Jack youre going to vist derricks coffin Christy yep Jack let me guess what youre thinking you ll miss us Christy that to Jack i know
jack pats christy
Meanwhile Tampa Funuearl Home
christy and jerry head inside
Minster there he is right now Christy thank you Jerry there he is Christy yep and a job well done of catching boyers Jerry derrick had everything didnt he' Christy yep Jerry by the way the riders truck arrived Christy oh thats good Jerry yeah
christy puts her arms around jerry and lays her head down on his shoulder and jerry kisses her head
christy gets some tears in her eyes
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
richard larkins walks in and sees the man who killed his son richard keeps staring at him
Jack so what are all these Boyers stuff me and kivers planned Jack i see so yall orginally were meant to start a terriost group and hire a few people Boyers yes Jack i see Boyers so is that it ? Jack yes
richard larkins gets out his gun and shoots sgt boyers 2 times in the chest and ribs killing him
Jack son of a pregnant dog nelson come here Nelson richard what the hel did you do Richard that son of a pregnant dog killed my son
jack does cpr on sgt boyers
Jack hes not responding Nelson d**n Jack yeah hes dead Nelson okay
jack calls christy
Christy he was shot who did it Jack derrick larkins dad did listen you let us handle it youre moving in 3 days remember Christy i know
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jerry invites larry and kate over for dinner and christy and jerry talk about their final days here and nelson gets ready for the surpise party tommrow
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 12, 2004 20:07:21 GMT -5
Part 11
Meanwhile Christys Ballatons House
christy had her feet on jerrys lap
Larry well everything is loaded Christy yep and it all goes tommrow Larry yeah place looks empty now Kate sure am gonna miss yall Larry yeah wow yall moving Christy and we ll do good in key west Larry yall better hahahahahahaha Kate im glad the crooks are dead Larry kate Kate well they got what they deserved after what they did to derrick Christy indeed
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Nelson well this is it Jack yep all ready tommrow then we ll do derricks funuearl after it Nelson yep and christy is going to get a little bit more of her stuff and we ll do the suprise party hahahahahaha Jack its going to be cool
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jerry head to the tampa atf agent station to get the last of their stuff and their in for a suprise and derricks funuearl gets ready
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 12, 2004 20:27:36 GMT -5
Part 12
Meanwhile Dusty Flemings House
dusty fixes karens breakfast
Dusty here Karen thanks Dusty we would be at the farewell party but i rather be with you Karen youre all heart Dusty no seriously were family you know i love you and i fixed you breakfast you were upset Karen thank you Dusty youre welcome and kate is going to be there at the farewell suprise party you okay ? Karen yeah Dusty alright these waffles are good mom also makes them good also remember Karen yeah Dusty well its all good Karen yeah
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
christy and jerry walks in
Christy uh hello ?
SURPISE
Jerry well ill be a son of a pregnant dog Nelson its a suprise party Christy daddy you knew about this Larry everyone did its one way of saving farewell Christy awww this is so good Jack yep for you 2
later on
christy and jerry cut the cake
Kate well sis Christy well Kate this is it Christy yeah i remember wben i first met you and knew you were my sister i was happy Kate so was i now remember you do good down there Christy you know we will
the story goes into no audio
christy and jerry hugs everyone in the tampa atf agent station and christy hugs her dad larry and kayte
then christy and jerry walks out nelson saultes christy and chrisy saultes nelson
later on
jack walks outside
Jack hey Christy hey yeah ill be there right there jerry so whats up Jack i want to say its been a real pleasure knowing you christy Christy you to Jack we had some fun times didnt we laughs catching bad guys Christy yeah well Jack you take care Christy you to Jack well i dont know what my new partner will be like Christy i know if he or she is not like me but least you ll get to know him/her but i dont think anyway theirs people out there who are hims who are like me Jack i know well farewell
jack and christy hug each other
christy and jack leaves
everyone gets ready for derrick larkins funuearl
TO BE CONCLUDED
Coming up on the next chapter dusty kate karen larry attend derricks funuearl so does jack and nelson and christy and jerry give one last goodbye to kate and larry and this time dusty
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Aug 14, 2004 1:54:59 GMT -5
Part 13
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
christy looks at her house
Jerry you okay ? Christy yeah well our home is going to be sold Jerry yep Christy man it sure was nice Jerry yeah
larry and kate and dusty walks up towards them
Larry hey look their still here Kate good dusty wants to say goodbye to them also Dusty sorry i couldnt be their at the farewell suprise party but listen i just want to say its been a pleasure knowing yall Christy thanks dusty
dusty and christy shake hands
Larry well were glad youre going to say farewell one more time but we need to hurry to get to derricks funuearl Christy i hope it goes good for yall Larry goodbye christy have fun down there
larry and christy hug each other
Christy least were not losing each other again like before Larry i know baby and i will make sure the house gets a new owner a good one Kate bye sis Christy bye
christy and kate hug each other
larry and jerry shake hands
Larry well were going to the funearl Christy ok me and jerry are going to stay and just look for a few minutes then we ll head to key west florida
larry and christy saulte each other
then larry dusty and kate takes off
the story goes into no audio
Meanwhile Tampa Cemetary
david danny stacy tracy arrives richard larkins and rhonda larkins arrives karen fleming arrives captain brock nelson jack brikers larry kate dusty arrives
Stacy okay watch your step david David i know mom Danny well lets remember our manners Tracy yes dad we know
karen fleming looks at a blue tube thingy and sighing
Dusty okay its about to start Karen yeah im coming Kate you been through alot karen
dusty kate karen and larry heads towards the chairs
Preist we gathered here to say a fond farewell the lords blessing and this persons coffin and the person we are saying farewell to is derrick larkins derrick larkins was a graduate student from chamberlaine high school may 2004 now this tragic day he was murdered his family his mom his dad his 2 brothers and sister and girlfriend karen fleming derrick left behind belongings mostly for his family and of course a few for karen but as we say
the story goes into no audio
richard and rhonda walks up towards karen and they hug each other
Priest ashes to ashes dust to dust
Meanwhile Chamberlaine High School
christy and jerry were saying goodbye to some of the teachers she knew and knew when she was in that school as a student and new ones
Meanwhile Tampa Cemetary
Rhonda you were the perfect girl for derrick Karen i know ms larkins Rhonda he always talked about you all the time to us on the phone Richard you made his day when he met you Karen i know im gonna miss him Rhonda me to karen
rhonda and karen hug each other
Stacy wonderful ceremony Danny yeah it sure was
tracy helps david walk by
David ill be so happy to get my vision back again Stacy i know sweety i know Tracy youre doing good so far David as long as yall here Tracy dont make me cry Stacy hahahahaha Danny yall do good
danny puts his arm around stacy and they kiss each other
dusty and kate hold hands
Dusty yall going home now ? Kate yeah Dusty okay well see ya tommrow Kate okay
dusty kisses kates hand and they hug and kiss eacb other and kinda rub each others bodies
karen looks at derricks tombstone
Dusty well i better go check to see if shes okay Kate yeah well i love you Dusty love you to see ya tommrow mr ballaton Larry okay dusty
christy and jerry drive by the tampa cemetary
Christy honey look Jerry yep
larry and kate sees christys blue ford explorer they wave at each other
Dusty we got to go now whats wrong ? Karen well if i tell you this please dont get mad Dusty i wont but what is it ? Karen well i think some people do get mad when they say this to someone hopefuly you wont Dusty just spill it out on whatever it is ill still be there for you Karen im pregnant Dusty what ? Karen yes pregnant derrick was the father now hes dead Dusty oh wow
christy and jerry drives near the leaving tampa florida sign at the interstate so does the riders truck
christy looks at the leaving tampa florida sign the story pauses to the leaving tampa florida sign
THE END
A New Story Season with new characters new fun to come
But for now Farewell And See you Next Story Season
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