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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 19, 2004 16:48:11 GMT -5
It was a cool morning in tampa florida traffic was busy people were going on and on about the return of sonic the hedgehog which was last week and newspapers saying are their really real life superheros
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
jerry rancho gets out of his patrol car
Jerry honey you home Christy yes Jerry oh okay Christy youre brothers here Jerry nick ? Christy yep bad news also he has to also
jerry walks in the living room
Jerry nick Nick jerry good Jerry whats wrong Nick wife kicked me out Jerry michelle ? Nick yep after 2 years of marrige she throws me out the door Jerry why did she do that Nick first all she was seening someone behind my back Jerry but why did she throw you out if you confronted her about whoever shes seening Nick well a friend of mine told me she saw her kissing another man and he called me up and then he showed me then i followed them to my house and thats when i confronted her Jerry what happened then Nick me and the guy argued and cussed at each other i punched the guy out in the nose then michelle flips out and she starts throwing stuff at me because i knocked the guy out and thats how she kicked me out Jerry well shes not gonna get away with this Nick no little brother let it go i told her before i walked out the door i said were through and i dont ever want to see her again besides im thinking of moving back to tampa Jerry still she had no right to do that to you what was this guys name Nick eric hall Jerry you dont half to put up with her no more im gonna half to get you a job somewhere and i know where
jerry looks at a ad of his former place he use to work at demolation comics so nick can work there now
Meanwhile Travers House
david was watching a rent movie in the living room with his mom stacy
stacy was barefooted and she was wearing her white vase and white gawn shorts
Stacy thanks for watching the movie with me david David youre welcome
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter stacy and david watch the movie and jerry helps his brother nick loads his stuff in the guest room so he can stay there untill he can afford a place of his own
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 19, 2004 17:08:42 GMT -5
Part 2
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
jerry helps his brother nick loads his stuff in the guest room
Nick so you can get me a job at demolition comics Jerry i done called tom and he said he ll hire you when you go to the interview Nick thanks for everything i know you done stuff for me before and i done stuff for you youre alright Jerry hey you did stuff for me when we were kids so im returning the favor Nick yep Jerry you need michelle Nick nope eric can have her
Meanwhile Travers House
stacy gets up from the chair then she puts her feet on her son davids chest and tickles david with her toes on his chest and presses her feet against his chest
david laughs
David mom not again Stacy oooo yes again David mom that tickles stop Stacy whats wrong do my feet stink David yes Stacy no they dont i wash them alot kiddo David i know hahahaha Stacy come give me a hug David why Stacy no gimme me a hug David okay
david hugs her mom stacy
Stacy i love you alots David i love you to mom Stacy i know we been through alot with all the threats we been reciving but no matter what ill always be there for you
stacy kisses davids head
David mom im 18 youre treating me like Stacy no david parents always say this to their kids even if they are young adults youre understand what im saying David yeah
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack recives a call from bill praxteen about someone robbing his store when they go there bill gets shot in the back
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 19, 2004 17:21:47 GMT -5
Part 3
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
jack brikers gets off the phone
Jack hey christy Christy yeah jack whats up Jack we got a call in from bill praxteen owner of the fruits grocery store he said someone is in his store Christy oh someone had to get robbed on martin luthor kings birthday Jack nelson wants us to go check it out Christy okay
jack and christy walks out the door
Meanwhile Travers House
danny travers walks in
Danny im home Stacy hey baby
danny and stacy hug each other and they kiss each other and they rub each others body slowly
tracy walks out from her room
Tracy oh not again cant yall give it a rest David they love each other Tracy duh i know but they do that 24/7 Stacy oh whats the matter with a wife greeting her husband when she comes home Tracy well mom you just never know when youre not wearing a condom i mean if you have a child which you are soon im gonna hit the seland Danny oh someones lurking Tracy by the way mom can i go to ashelys house Stacy whats going on there Tracy her birthday is tommrow and i want to go by and hang out and give her her present Stacy yes i guess its okay but be back before 10 youre going to school tommrow Tracy i will bye
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter danny and stacy talk about their arrangments for their
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 20, 2004 15:25:38 GMT -5
Part 4
Meanwhile Fruit N Grocerys
christy ballaton and jack brikers arrives
Christy bill Jack bill Bill right here Christy are they still in the store Bill i dont know i didnt checked
a car comes by and shoots bill in the back twice killing him
Jack get down Christy bill bill Jack hes dead do you think Christy yes the tag on the van i reconized it its one of edges man Jack what reason would they want bill dead Christy i dont know their has to be a reason why they killed him
christy gets on her walkie talkie
Christy atf to dispatcher bill prax is dead home and run robbery Dispatcher copy that Jack lets go
christy and jack gets in their car and drives off
kimi watches them leave
Meanwhile Travers House
Stacy so when the baby arrives i think we oaught to change the guest room to the babys room Danny yeah no one never sleeps in there anyway Stacy good idea
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack and jerry go home and danny and stacy have sex
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 20, 2004 15:32:19 GMT -5
Part 5
Meanwhile Tampa ATF Agent Station
Nelson you were right the tags matches michael edges shirt suit Christy before i shot ronnie larkins he was working with him but hey wheres logan at Nelson he was transfered to the prison on sunday Christy oh Jack logan is ronnies accomplaince so he ll know why they been doing what they have been doing Christy well i knew ronnie and logan since middle school and believe me their not all that smart Nelson well ill tell yall what how bout yall go home for the day and come back tommrow and ill go to the prison and see what i can get out of logan Christy okay Jack you need us there to right Nelson no ill go yall go home Christy okay
christy and jack walks out
Meanwhile Travers House
danny and stacy have sex they rub each others body
they do it for hours
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter nelson goes to the prison to talk to logan but nelson lashes out at him when logan refuses to talk
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 20, 2004 15:44:16 GMT -5
Part 6
Meanwhile Tampa Prison
Cruzer well nelson hes been at sanatary ways Nelson well theirs a crime going on another terriost group and hes in on it Cruzer warden captain nelson needs to see logan gryer Warden yes sir right this way Cruzer ill be out here when youre talking to him Warden alright logan come with me
warden takes logan to the attonery room
logan smiles then has a angry grin
Cruzer captain nelson is gonna talk to you Logan i know who you are
cruzer walks out
Nelson of course you do Logan whatever you have im not gonna listen so youre wasting your time being here Nelson no im here because i know you and ronnie had a terriost session on and michael edge was leader of the pack now i want to know is where michael edge is hiding out Logan are you deaf i said youre wasting your time being here Nelson now you listen to me here someone got shot today because this person was a witness to his own store being robbed now im gonna give you just one last chance to tell me where hes hiding at Logan I disagree
nelson grabs logans throat and shoves him against a wall nelson punches logan in the stomach 2 times
ugh ugh
then nelson punches logan in the nose
ugh
cruzer and the warden pulls nelson back
Nelson one way or another youre gonna talk
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on part 7 cruzer tells nelson to take it slow as nelson leaves the prison nelson calls christy up and tells him logan didnt talk
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 21, 2004 16:08:56 GMT -5
Part 7
Meanwhile Tampa Prison
Cruzer look nelson i knew you for 2 or 3 years now and i know how you are about punks like him not talking Nelson he thinks he won Cruzer no he didnt he ll know soon Nelson well i better be going can you try to get anything out of him Cruzer i think i know a way to Nelson we tortured him before Cruzer perhaps ill try that i know a certain way to make him talk Nelson yeah well listen i think ill send one of my agents to help you Cruzer no you come here also we need you Nelson alright ill come back i got to call her up
Meanwhile Travers House
danny was giving stacy a foot massage
Danny you know the better days like this i always know were a cool family Stacy yeah i hope they catch those gang soon and our son david will be safe Danny hey their also after us to Stacy no i dontr think so Danny their targetting us to because they quote our son is a retard Stacy he has friends they know hes not retarted Danny i just want to get my hands on all their gangs and shoot every one of them Stacy i know you want to protect us but killing them wont help Danny what other choice do we have besides these gang are young people and their easy to get back
Meanwhile Christy Ballatons House
Christy yes nelson honey i got to go to the prison were gonna get a lead nelson wants me and jack over there Jerry okay ill stay here Christy he asks me and jack anyway see ya
christy walks out
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter christy and jack arrive at the prison to torture logan but something goes wrong when he does and a creek sound is heard at the travers house
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 21, 2004 16:32:07 GMT -5
Part 8
Meanwhile Travers House
guess who was back at the travers house yep eric and the gang but chuckie is both the leader and the ring leader since lester died
Eric okay im in Chuckie good listen stay over there im sending vaughan with you Vaughan im heading over there now Chuckie pay back time
a creek sound is heard david hears it
David uh o
david gets out a gun he brought
eric hacks the alarm passcode
Eric okay im in
eric gets out his gun
David ill take care of this pronto
david thingys his gun eric hears it and sees david
eric laughs
Eric go ahead retard shoot that gun David take one more step then i will i want let you threaten me no more Eric coward
eric steps then he tries to grab davids gone but david shoots eric in the stomach
it wakes up danny stacy tracy skyler and megan
Eric *weak voice* oooo you pregnant dog David arghhhhhhhhh
david shoots eric again in the chest killing him
Danny david whats going on david look out
vaughan gets out his gun and shoots david in the shoulder
david yells painly
danny shoots vaughan in the chest killing him
then 2 gangsters and chuckie gets back in the truck danny chases after them with his rifle
one of the gangs tries to shoot at danny but danny shoots him in the chest
and danny keeps shooting at the truck and danny shoots chuckie in the back of the head killing him
danny keeps on shooting the truck untill it crashes
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter jerry rushes to the travers house and sees the incident and cops arrive there also about the shooting
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 21, 2004 16:47:36 GMT -5
Part 9
Meanwhile Debrief Room
Logan ah well well well christy ballaton you think you can get me to talk wrong you cant Christy youre patheic you know that Logan more better then being a pooky like you Jack mine your matters youre talking to a lady Logan you aint no guts and no glory either Nelson alright Christy okay they done the cermey test they got it on medium Nelson alright logan where is michael edges hide out
nelson uses a bracer and it shocks logan
logan screames
Nelson where is michael edges hide out
nelson uses the bracer and it shocks logan again this time logan screams loud
Meanwhile Travers House
jerry rancho arrives in his tampa atf agent patrol car
Jerry its okay im a atf agent David d**n it hurts like hell i never been shot before Stacy well it worried me because i thought that was it for you David well i think im gonna be okay i was just shot in the arm kind of Deputy 1 was this the gun youre son used on that person Danny yes Deputy 1 kid dont you know its ileggiel to have one of these guns without a permit Danny look take it easy alright he was protecting himself these gangs been sending him threats for months now Tracy now its finally over Stacy yep it is Jerry any surviors over at the truck Deputy 1 nope all the suspects are dead Danny its offically over
danny kisses stacy
Jerry well yall been through alot yall should go rest Danny yeah my son is a fighter and he ll be fine
TO BE CONTUINED
Coming up on the next chapter something goes wrong on the tortured of logan and stacy and danny have more sex again
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Post by theflemingrancho1 on Jan 23, 2004 23:39:48 GMT -5
Part 10
Meanwhile Tampa Prison
logan yells
Christy youre making matters worst Nelson so tell us where it is
volts hit logan again
Logan wait ill tell you Christy okay spill it out Logan its th th th Christy the what
logans eyes flatter then logan blacks out
Nelson cut it off Jack what just happened to him Christy i dont know Cruzer what happened Nelson hes unconcious for some reason Warden i just saw what happened what went wrong Cruzer was the clemtory sent to medium Warden the prex said it was on large Cruzer what the hell was it doing on large Warden someone mustve switched it to large
christy jack nelson looks suprised
THE END
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